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Strong Stars
In the startling silence of black night.
The ancient stars sweetly whine
with the weight of countless wishes.
Secret desires succeed in shine,
burning with the chance for fruition.
Of those that longed with daily battle cries.
To end torments that the sun brightly denied.
And when the day arrives wearing heaven's blue.
Never forget, strength has a voice too.
Star beaming out of you.
The ancient stars sweetly whine
with the weight of countless wishes.
Secret desires succeed in shine,
burning with the chance for fruition.
Of those that longed with daily battle cries.
To end torments that the sun brightly denied.
And when the day arrives wearing heaven's blue.
Never forget, strength has a voice too.
Star beaming out of you.
Author's Note
An ode to myself.
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Re. Strong Stars
16th Jun 2024 1:43pm
Lovely Ode
"Never forget, strength has a voice too." favorite and felt line. Fia xoxo
"Never forget, strength has a voice too." favorite and felt line. Fia xoxo
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16th Jun 2024 1:53pm
Re. Strong Stars
16th Jun 2024 1:58pm
An Ode to you.
Awesome write. Your words flow always so beautifully. Your a gift my friend
Awesome write. Your words flow always so beautifully. Your a gift my friend
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Re: Re. Strong Stars
16th Jun 2024 2:07pm
Re. Strong Stars
16th Jun 2024 4:43pm
What a stellar write. People stare at the sky for answers, so many times. Yet it's more of a listener, as we figure out things ourselves. It's a great audience, huh.
I love your naturalistic writes. It's earthly yet spiritual too.
I love your naturalistic writes. It's earthly yet spiritual too.
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Re: Re. Strong Stars
16th Jun 2024 5:09pm
Thank you so very much. I wrote it in a time I'm grappling for answers,
wishing on stars, trying to remind myself I'm strong.
wishing on stars, trying to remind myself I'm strong.
Re. Strong Stars
16th Jun 2024 7:13pm
I was hooked right from the title, and it only got better from there. Shine on, star!
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16th Jun 2024 7:58pm
Re. Strong Stars
16th Jun 2024 9:58pm
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16th Jun 2024 10:36pm
Re. Strong Stars
17th Jun 2024 12:38pm
As we grow, we start to direct our mystical visions into the outer spaces,a s the sky and the stars become our musing themes, and they hold our wishes and hopes like human beings, why not we have always some kind of intimacy with
those bright flickering objects hung into night dome watching over us until we become one of them..
Thanks for sharing. my friend
those bright flickering objects hung into night dome watching over us until we become one of them..
Thanks for sharing. my friend
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Re: Re. Strong Stars
17th Jun 2024 2:19pm
Re. Strong Stars
18th Jun 2024 10:09am
Such a twinkling piece of write!!
Omg!
I love it.
You tell them!
Inside you shine strong, brilliant lights
And may your wishes come true
With every battle, you win
Even if you fall, you rise
And shine evermore!
♡
Omg!
I love it.
You tell them!
Inside you shine strong, brilliant lights
And may your wishes come true
With every battle, you win
Even if you fall, you rise
And shine evermore!
♡
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Re: Re. Strong Stars
18th Jun 2024 10:40am
Re. Strong Stars
18th Jun 2024 10:16am
Beautiful ode! GD I love the way this sounds and I love the visual "And when the day arrives wearing heaven's blue."
LJ
LJ
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Re: Re. Strong Stars
18th Jun 2024 10:42am
Re. Strong Stars
18th Jun 2024 2:36pm
Your author's note made me smile, that's such a beautiful idea :-)
And what a mesmerizing piece of ink, the imagery is simply amazing.
"Never forget, strength has a voice too" > love this line, so much truth in it.
And what a mesmerizing piece of ink, the imagery is simply amazing.
"Never forget, strength has a voice too" > love this line, so much truth in it.
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Re: Re. Strong Stars
18th Jun 2024 4:12pm
Thanks so much for your wonderful feedback.
Sometimes I write myself hope and strength and love when it
shines on others ⭐✨
Sometimes I write myself hope and strength and love when it
shines on others ⭐✨
Re. Strong Stars
Anonymous
18th Jun 2024 7:19pm
What an amazing self affirmation! We could all use reminders like this. Nicely done!

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Re: Re. Strong Stars
18th Jun 2024 7:28pm
Re. Strong Stars
5th Jul 2024 6:25am
Nice way of using the language of the night sky and universe to show overcoming hardship and drawing those analogies. I like the translation of the "blue sky", as it makes for the perfect environment of confidence, so to speak. Anyway, again, overall, you don't need me to point out everything - you're already a good writer, and I enjoy reading. Thanks for sharing!
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Re: Re. Strong Stars
5th Jul 2024 10:53am
Hello! I like when you point out things because I cannot always see my writing that way .it's very
interesting to me. So thank you so very much.
interesting to me. So thank you so very much.