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My Dad Leroy
My dad's name is Leroy
As you can see
The title above states so explicitly
He had two girls
I was one you see
I was the smallest of the two
He loved us unconditionally
My dad's name is Leroy
He came from across the sea
My mom and him wanted to do something differently
My dad's name is Leroy
He had demon you see
A demon called alcohol
It changed his moods drastically
Sometimes he's was laughing
Sometimes he's was sad
Sometimes he's was silent
Sometimes he's was mad
My dad's name is Leroy
A demon was his friend
It was no where around
Once it was the end
My dad's name is Leroy
He held a lot inside
Never let us girls know
Always had a twinkle in his eyes
What I remember most
When he came to my meet
The pride that he showed
Watching me compete
Am I a daddy's girl ?
I guess I am
Sitting here writing this
Tears falling on this pen
My dad's name is Leroy
Making sure you got that.
As you can see
The title above states so explicitly
He had two girls
I was one you see
I was the smallest of the two
He loved us unconditionally
My dad's name is Leroy
He came from across the sea
My mom and him wanted to do something differently
My dad's name is Leroy
He had demon you see
A demon called alcohol
It changed his moods drastically
Sometimes he's was laughing
Sometimes he's was sad
Sometimes he's was silent
Sometimes he's was mad
My dad's name is Leroy
A demon was his friend
It was no where around
Once it was the end
My dad's name is Leroy
He held a lot inside
Never let us girls know
Always had a twinkle in his eyes
What I remember most
When he came to my meet
The pride that he showed
Watching me compete
Am I a daddy's girl ?
I guess I am
Sitting here writing this
Tears falling on this pen
My dad's name is Leroy
Making sure you got that.
Author's Note
To explain a meet. I used to run track. So it's a track meet.
Remember I'm small. 4'11" running against tall girls so he was proud. Win or lose.
Remember I'm small. 4'11" running against tall girls so he was proud. Win or lose.
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Re. My Dad Leroy
16th Jun 2024 2:20am
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16th Jun 2024 2:47am
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16th Jun 2024 3:09am
Re. My Dad Leroy
16th Jun 2024 3:18am
This is fantastic!
It has great rhythm and meter.
What a wonderful tribute:)
It has great rhythm and meter.
What a wonderful tribute:)
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Re: Re. My Dad Leroy
16th Jun 2024 3:21am
Re. My Dad Leroy
16th Jun 2024 7:41am
Like dad like girl.
Resolution and endurance bequeathed.
Nice Portrait of a successful life..
Resolution and endurance bequeathed.
Nice Portrait of a successful life..
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Re: Re. My Dad Leroy
16th Jun 2024 12:24pm
Re. My Dad Leroy
16th Jun 2024 9:36am
It sounds like your dad Leroy loved you very much. 💜
The poem had a great flow and rhyme.
The poem had a great flow and rhyme.
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Re: Re. My Dad Leroy
16th Jun 2024 12:26pm
Thank you, Debbie. I was faltering a bit, but I made it through. Appreciate you commenting.
Re. My Dad Leroy
16th Jun 2024 2:17pm
There is nothing wrong with feeling that ache simply by here your parents name, and we think that all humans come with flaws or demons. The things to think on are the good times if there were any, tight
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16th Jun 2024 2:30pm
Re. My Dad Leroy
16th Jun 2024 2:28pm
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16th Jun 2024 2:31pm
Re. My Dad Leroy
17th Jun 2024 00:07am
This is a beautiful tribute. A remembrance of a man that is honest and pure. Im die he must be smiling somewhere reading this and seeing his baby girl out in the world handling her business.
Well done again Cuzzo. 🙂
Well done again Cuzzo. 🙂
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17th Jun 2024 00:21am
Re. My Dad Leroy
28th Jul 2024 6:27am
This is brilliantly done. I was friends with that same demon. So I had my dark days, and a mood that changed on a dime. This is a brave write. If I had an RL available, I'd have used it here. Appreciate you.
DL
DL
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Re: Re. My Dad Leroy
28th Jul 2024 2:10pm
Thank you DL He was on my mind really heavy that day, when I wrote this.;))