Salvation (Written  With DampKitten)

Brilliant write. Nice collaboration you two. Appreciate you both.






DL

Thank you DL for reading and commenting

This was fun, girl.  Thank you.

Omg you guys kicked ass! Great collab!

Thank you Betty appreciate it

One of the best that I have read in a long time.

Thank you Adagio appreciate that.

Ok I can feel my heart melting … you two are amazing poetesses… amazing everything… amazing… oh god.. now my tongue is melting

Thank you Sam.  Where is that tongue while it's melting?? Thank you 💞

Behave… we’re in a public site… and don’t moan too load … otherwise people would know

Nice collaboration. An exquisite piece of art. Wonderful!

Thank you Vision,  I appreciate that 🙏 😃

Very good but a little too dark for me; especially the ending

Thank you eightmore. for commenting;)

Wow. Sounds like a great way to die. Great work!

Thank you AfterSexDilemma. appreciate the read and comment

What a beautiful poem!
It speaks directly to my heart.!💕

Aww thank you Sappho. appreciate it

By working on the same outlet, you two are electrical and make a great team. Well done.

Thanks, Tim it is fun working with her.

What a sacrifice poem !
one must die to let the other live..
Fine interpretation and collaboration..Fia

Stay safe and active always.. regards .

Thank you Hamid it was a fun collab.

I love the back-and-forth. Feels kind of like a call-and-response situation.

My only feedback would be that it's too short! I feel like the two of you started something good here, just extend on it. :)

Thank you for picking that up. Appreciate you commenting.