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Nature and life
Nature breathes us life
spurn its socour, so selfish
hastens our demise
So great its bounty
to abuse it and despise
bind that undermines
Burnt our bridges, crossed
to late, for the amens repost
inadaquacy
Ashes of what could be
paradise, dreams unachieved
our stupidity
spurn its socour, so selfish
hastens our demise
So great its bounty
to abuse it and despise
bind that undermines
Burnt our bridges, crossed
to late, for the amens repost
inadaquacy
Ashes of what could be
paradise, dreams unachieved
our stupidity
Published 9th Jun 2024
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9th Jun 2024 8:40pm
Live life as if it will end tomorrow for although tomorrow never really comes the end surely does...
10th Jun 2024 3:26pm
Anonymous
9th Jun 2024 9:38pm
Nature was here long before us and we should take care of it the best we can. Some, however, whether it's everyday people or corporations refuse to see the importance of maintaining what beauty there is around us. And that's a shame.
10th Jun 2024 1:13am
10th Jun 2024 3:33pm
quite a challenge to form a Haiku string, most of the entries are Senryu form. I read that the strict form of Haiku should have nature as its base
Allways a pleasure to hear from you Ahvati I miss your admonishments
Allways a pleasure to hear from you Ahvati I miss your admonishments
24th Jun 2024 4:24am
