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Indistinguishable in every way
They were identical twins and beautiful
they shared toys,
they shared lovers,
they shared feelings
they shared clothes,
they shared the automobile,
they shared needles,
they shared their horrifying near death experiences,
they shared the emergency room,
they shared a wake & funeral,
they now share the same plot and gravestone.
they shared toys,
they shared lovers,
they shared feelings
they shared clothes,
they shared the automobile,
they shared needles,
they shared their horrifying near death experiences,
they shared the emergency room,
they shared a wake & funeral,
they now share the same plot and gravestone.
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Re. Indistinguishable in every way
9th Jun 2024 12:04pm
Now if only they could share funeral costs, then all would be swell :)
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9th Jun 2024 12:06pm
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9th Jun 2024 7:17pm
HA! I thought so too. I needed a disturbing picture & I found one.
Thanks for the feedback.
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Re. Indistinguishable in every way
9th Jun 2024 5:17pm
Nicely concise story of two synchronized, ill-fated lives. The simplicity gives it an ironic darkness.
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