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in the presence of a silent room
the rosy cold has
spread its wings everywhere
the soft rays of the sun
have become kidnapped
the misty moon
rises on a naughty night
and the white wave of bliss
slowly starts touching my body
my body trembles
my black hole fills with
bright energy
my eyes become blurry
i get freeze in the
white sheet like a rabbit...
Published 8th Jun 2024
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8th Jun 2024 3:48pm
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8th Jun 2024 4:22pm
So very descriptive, it's a little dark also. You can take this piece in the direction of lots of monsters. Tight work Lady
9th Jun 2024 4:21am
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13th Jun 2024 3:52am
this was written from the heart... thank you for choosing to read it... Appreciate your feedback..
13th Jun 2024 3:54am
13th Jun 2024 3:57am
Exactly... I appreciate your words... you came and read me, I'm grateful for that
13th Jun 2024 3:58am
