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Writer
Are you a poet?
Some say I’m one
Are you in the business?
It’s hard to break through.
Anyone who is anyone cant see you.
Are you a star?
Do you mean like the ones in the sky?
Yes, are you a star?
Maybe a twinkle in my family’s eyes.
What have you done?
Not enough, I guess.
My work is not recognized.
I will do my best.
Why don’t you change your style?
Do you mean change who I am?
No just your writing style
Again, change who I am.
Why not just a little?
A little is too much.
I’ll be hiding in shadows.
And there are enough shadows around us.
I’ll ask you a question.
Alright, go ahead.
Why are you a writer...reporter?
That is who I am when I get out of bed.
That’s funny.
What’s funny? Tell me, please.
I should change the way I write and convey a story.
To make you feel at ease.
Is there anything else you want to say?
Yeah, I do.
I’m a poet, writer, lover, friend.
I cannot change what comes to me.
Stifling my creativity.
I may be raunchy, rude, crude and downright harsh.
But everything I do comes from the heart.
Don’t read what I write.
It may not be for you.
But I’ll keep writing.
To thine self be true.
Some say I’m one
Are you in the business?
It’s hard to break through.
Anyone who is anyone cant see you.
Are you a star?
Do you mean like the ones in the sky?
Yes, are you a star?
Maybe a twinkle in my family’s eyes.
What have you done?
Not enough, I guess.
My work is not recognized.
I will do my best.
Why don’t you change your style?
Do you mean change who I am?
No just your writing style
Again, change who I am.
Why not just a little?
A little is too much.
I’ll be hiding in shadows.
And there are enough shadows around us.
I’ll ask you a question.
Alright, go ahead.
Why are you a writer...reporter?
That is who I am when I get out of bed.
That’s funny.
What’s funny? Tell me, please.
I should change the way I write and convey a story.
To make you feel at ease.
Is there anything else you want to say?
Yeah, I do.
I’m a poet, writer, lover, friend.
I cannot change what comes to me.
Stifling my creativity.
I may be raunchy, rude, crude and downright harsh.
But everything I do comes from the heart.
Don’t read what I write.
It may not be for you.
But I’ll keep writing.
To thine self be true.
Author's Note
Another late night musing
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- Edited 19th Dec 2024 5:45pm
8th Jun 2024 5:01am
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Re. Writer
8th Jun 2024 5:03am
I couldn't have said it better, my friend, sticking to wild winds and breathing fresh air.
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8th Jun 2024 11:52am
Re. Writer
8th Jun 2024 5:07am
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Re. Writer
8th Jun 2024 6:32am
What an amazing piece, love the layout and the playful shift between bold parts and normal parts. Those last lines are my favorite. We should always write from the heart 💕
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8th Jun 2024 11:50am
Re. Writer
8th Jun 2024 10:29am
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8th Jun 2024 11:51am
Re. Writer
8th Jun 2024 12:58pm
The amazing thing each writer is a special star in the universe of words; daring to choose the right ones, which you have in this poem. Love an hugs, Oral
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8th Jun 2024 12:59pm
Re. Writer
8th Jun 2024 5:30pm
I always wished to make money from writing, Fia but unless one has a very big fan base or is someone like Simon Armitage, for example, it's almost impossible to make decent money from it, I think. An intermediate ambition with poetry could include trying to get published in journals & entering competitions with a cash prize. Certain events offer wine at the table by the stage, too, lol. Songwriting will bring in the most income if one can break into that market. It requires luck also. With poetry, I think you'll have to carry on writing 'for love' lol. I once wrote a poem called, 'Pop Star Poets' which touches on this a little. It's in my archive at present. I did enjoy reading this piece & it's what I would call self analysis, said in an honest way. Interesting write. 😊
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8th Jun 2024 5:52pm
Re. Writer
8th Jun 2024 9:10pm
BRAVO
KEEP ON KEEPING ON
THOSE WHO ARE CRITICAL, WELL YOU KNOW WHERE THEY CAN SHOVE IT
BIG LIKE
KEEP ON KEEPING ON
THOSE WHO ARE CRITICAL, WELL YOU KNOW WHERE THEY CAN SHOVE IT
BIG LIKE
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8th Jun 2024 9:15pm
Re. Writer
9th Jun 2024 9:21pm
You've got a series of really strong and very diverse pieces right here in a row. It just speaks to your talent and imagination. I love the anatomy of this piece, the literary volley, the emphatic summation and assertive attitude. So unique and relatable. I love the stuff you're putting out there.
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Re: Re. Writer
9th Jun 2024 9:58pm
Thank you for the compliments. And the breakdown of why you like it. Dk
appreciate it
appreciate it