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Amazing Cloud Gazing
Heavenly snow white clouds
to get lost in, a comfy kingdom.
Within the divine puffs
are dreams lingering crumbs.
Entranced by the robust fluffiness.
A magnificent white wondrous bliss.
The towering clouds make me feel
anything I can imagine is possible.
Makes the human in hope feel unstoppable.
If for only a moment,
disintegrating obstacles..........
to get lost in, a comfy kingdom.
Within the divine puffs
are dreams lingering crumbs.
Entranced by the robust fluffiness.
A magnificent white wondrous bliss.
The towering clouds make me feel
anything I can imagine is possible.
Makes the human in hope feel unstoppable.
If for only a moment,
disintegrating obstacles..........
Author's Note
Mind in the gorgeous clouds.
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Re. Amazing Cloud Gazing
7th Jun 2024 11:03pm
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7th Jun 2024 11:20pm
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7th Jun 2024 11:06pm
Sounds like you've got your head in the clouds again, Debbie!!! Errr, in a good way, of course. ☁️ 😉
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7th Jun 2024 11:21pm
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8th Jun 2024 2:23am
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8th Jun 2024 9:24am
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Re. Amazing Cloud Gazing
8th Jun 2024 6:28am
What a beautiful piece, it reads like an ode to clouds. You can truly get lost in clouds 💕
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8th Jun 2024 9:28am
Thank you so much. I know there are some people who never notice the clouds,
but us writers do. Yup, I'm always lost in the clouds, lol
Thx for checking out!
but us writers do. Yup, I'm always lost in the clouds, lol
Thx for checking out!
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8th Jun 2024 11:34am
You're so very welcome, dear poetess :-)
I took many photos of the clouds. People were looking at me like I was crazy, lol.
I took many photos of the clouds. People were looking at me like I was crazy, lol.
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8th Jun 2024 11:49am
People don't see the beauty right in front of their face, lol.
Have a wonderful weekend!
Have a wonderful weekend!
Re. Amazing Cloud Gazing
9th Jun 2024 2:47am
Great pic!
It sets the tone for the write so wonderfully. They do look like a big
comfy kingdom.
Some of my best times as a kid is when I'd lay on
our trampoline and watch the clouds go by. Just daydreaming and letting my
mind drift:)
It sets the tone for the write so wonderfully. They do look like a big
comfy kingdom.
Some of my best times as a kid is when I'd lay on
our trampoline and watch the clouds go by. Just daydreaming and letting my
mind drift:)
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9th Jun 2024 3:48am
Thanks for sharing that memory. It's those big fluffy clouds that capture
my imagination. Thanks so much for checking out!
my imagination. Thanks so much for checking out!
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9th Jun 2024 3:43am
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Re. Amazing Cloud Gazing
5th Jul 2024 6:13am
Cumulous clouds are extremely tranquil, to me. They can remind of both things as serious adults, and experience as youth to summarize such things. A nice topic to write about for sure. I'm glad you can see something so normal and continue to be thankful for it. It's really an artist's delight! An innocent and emotional disposition to see the light in the clouds, heh. Thanks for sharing!
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5th Jul 2024 2:34pm
Yes I love the cumulous ones.
Everything in nature inspires me, lol.
Thx for your thoughts and checking out.
Everything in nature inspires me, lol.
Thx for your thoughts and checking out.