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She left
She left you
Because of your drinking
You went to AA classes
You got help
No one noticed your pain
You didn't need a bullet
You didn't need a gun
You could have made it through
Now your family is feeling your pain
But we can't be selfish at this time
We just wonder why
But we will never know
Until we reach you in heaven
You didn't need a bullet
You didn't need a gun
R.I.P. Mickey we all will miss you from this very day 5/8/12
Because of your drinking
You went to AA classes
You got help
No one noticed your pain
You didn't need a bullet
You didn't need a gun
You could have made it through
Now your family is feeling your pain
But we can't be selfish at this time
We just wonder why
But we will never know
Until we reach you in heaven
You didn't need a bullet
You didn't need a gun
R.I.P. Mickey we all will miss you from this very day 5/8/12
Published 9th May 2012
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10th May 2012 2:40am
I hope that this wasnt inspired by real life, and if so im very sorry but I think you have a real knack for word choice and a "You didnt need a bullet. You didnt need a gun" would make an interesting chorus if you are interested in making it a song,just a suggestion because of its lyricism.
