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Headstone
She closed her eyes and smiled for the last time
She lived a life she was meant to and put it to rhyme
Some of it went as plan
Some of it was a mystery out of her hand
When she held you, you knew love
You knew honest emotion
You knew her
She lived a life to make others smile
Even when hers faltered or was hidden from sight
She wants you to remember her for a while
When you feel the warmth of the sun
In a break in the storm
When all is unraveled, and your best intentions are undone
She is holding you to make you smile
That is her (a smile)
She lived a life she was meant to and put it to rhyme
Some of it went as plan
Some of it was a mystery out of her hand
When she held you, you knew love
You knew honest emotion
You knew her
She lived a life to make others smile
Even when hers faltered or was hidden from sight
She wants you to remember her for a while
When you feel the warmth of the sun
In a break in the storm
When all is unraveled, and your best intentions are undone
She is holding you to make you smile
That is her (a smile)
Written by
fianaturie8
(Fia Naturie)
Published 2nd Jun 2024
Author's Note
For the epitaph competition
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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2nd Jun 2024 5:13pm
👏 👏 👏!! Extremely excellent 👏 warm heart ❤ felt endearing headstone beautiful musing queen 👸!!
Peace ✌ and blessings 🙏 always 💖 shalom
Peace ✌ and blessings 🙏 always 💖 shalom
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Thank you for reading and putting me on your RL.I do appreciate that. Fia xoxo
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3rd Jun 2024 3:33am
Fia,
Simply brilliant. Good luck, in the competition. Appreciate you.
DL
Simply brilliant. Good luck, in the competition. Appreciate you.
DL
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3rd Jun 2024 8:07pm
I could feel the emotions of the moments. Excellent, as usual. Hugs and love, Oral
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3rd Jun 2024 8:09pm
Thank you so much for that. Strangely enough, it hit me harder than I thought it would. My not do another epitaph. Too many tears on that one.
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