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Invitation
Once upon a time
In a world we once known
There was a castle that stood
With a secret down below
It was made of stone
And craved with rock
Only the dark ones know
What’s behind the lock
Tonight
there is a treat to behold
A claiming of sorts
A soul to a soul to a soul
They all have come
To see the sight
The old ways are new
In flickering candlelight
So be my guest
See a delight
But I must warn you
This will not be a pure sight
Leave behind
What you think you know
Dress your best
Get ready for the show
In a world we once known
There was a castle that stood
With a secret down below
It was made of stone
And craved with rock
Only the dark ones know
What’s behind the lock
Tonight
there is a treat to behold
A claiming of sorts
A soul to a soul to a soul
They all have come
To see the sight
The old ways are new
In flickering candlelight
So be my guest
See a delight
But I must warn you
This will not be a pure sight
Leave behind
What you think you know
Dress your best
Get ready for the show
Author's Note
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Re. Invitation
31st May 2024 4:53pm
shall I wear a tie?... or you already have that covered!?!... you are getting good at this video thing... the voice very sultry... wonder why?
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31st May 2024 5:07pm
Yeah, your....Covered? My voice is cued for tonight.
as for this video I need to take classes to learn to edit. lol (Smiling)
as for this video I need to take classes to learn to edit. lol (Smiling)
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Anonymous
31st May 2024 5:39pm
Let some sin take place...Are you the queen of that palace ?? Coz then i can imagine how it'd be like 🤤😉
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31st May 2024 5:51pm
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Anonymous
31st May 2024 6:04pm
Someone keeping me excited 👉👈
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31st May 2024 6:09pm
You wrote a fun poem with a beautiful reading. I believe I have a dress for the occasion, my interest is peaked.
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31st May 2024 6:13pm
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1st Jun 2024 2:19am
"So, be my guest" - wow, you almost threw me into Disney!
I have on Sam's Tuxedo, and it doesn't fit me very well.
I have on Sam's Tuxedo, and it doesn't fit me very well.
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1st Jun 2024 2:20am
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1st Jun 2024 11:36am
There's few things I love more than spoken word poetry. Voice giving so much depth to a piece.
And what a sultry piece this is, the flow of it is simply amazing!
Leave behind
What you think you know > this gives an exta touch to the whole setting.
And what a sultry piece this is, the flow of it is simply amazing!
Leave behind
What you think you know > this gives an exta touch to the whole setting.
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1st Jun 2024 11:45am
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4th Jun 2024 11:25pm
Brilliantly executed. Well written and the presentation kicks ass!!!!
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4th Jun 2024 11:33pm
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4th Jun 2024 11:33pm