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Tainted Serenity
a little
distorted
frequency
is
what
i am
an interrupting
raindrop
on a sunny day
spoiling
the
vibe
that burning
indigestion
at night
that
wakes you
from sleep
a rotting branch
laying among
the flowers
tainting
the
veiw
distorted
frequency
is
what
i am
an interrupting
raindrop
on a sunny day
spoiling
the
vibe
that burning
indigestion
at night
that
wakes you
from sleep
a rotting branch
laying among
the flowers
tainting
the
veiw
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Re. Tainted Serenity
31st May 2024 1:01pm
Our lens can sometimes get clouded because of our experiences.
Here, let me wipe it off for you and show you what I see:
A man whose heart beats wildly and is filled to capacity with love and compassion
A man whose passion should be a handbook for others
A man whose dreams are so beautiful they put the Mona Lisa’s smile to shame
And a friend whose loyalty and steadfastness can’t be matched
Here, let me wipe it off for you and show you what I see:
A man whose heart beats wildly and is filled to capacity with love and compassion
A man whose passion should be a handbook for others
A man whose dreams are so beautiful they put the Mona Lisa’s smile to shame
And a friend whose loyalty and steadfastness can’t be matched
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31st May 2024 1:09pm
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31st May 2024 1:14pm
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31st May 2024 1:16pm
Re. Tainted Serenity
Modest men are highly regarded, raised into the beautiful view.
humility is synonym of humanity.
humility is synonym of humanity.
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Re: Re. Tainted Serenity
31st May 2024 1:17pm
Re: Re. Tainted Serenity
I dont understand your words.
you gave little worth to yourself, i gave you much worth by being humble, humble ones are highly appreciated and you say its not worth of you?..
can you be more specific in your words ? in your poetry?
"a rotting branch
laying among
the flowers
tainting
the
veiw"
you gave little worth to yourself, i gave you much worth by being humble, humble ones are highly appreciated and you say its not worth of you?..
can you be more specific in your words ? in your poetry?
"a rotting branch
laying among
the flowers
tainting
the
veiw"
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Re: Re. Tainted Serenity
31st May 2024 1:33pm
Re: Re. Tainted Serenity
31st May 2024 1:36pm
did you reread what you posted ?
- you describe yourself as killjoy, so dont blame the readers
if they misunderstand you, even though i gave you much more respect, but you seem to be injected with xenophobia !!!!!
- you describe yourself as killjoy, so dont blame the readers
if they misunderstand you, even though i gave you much more respect, but you seem to be injected with xenophobia !!!!!
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Re: Re. Tainted Serenity
31st May 2024 1:41pm
I'm autistic
which means it takes me a hell of a long time to trust also take compliments when their given
self hate
suicidal
and just alive
which means it takes me a hell of a long time to trust also take compliments when their given
self hate
suicidal
and just alive
Re: Re. Tainted Serenity
31st May 2024 1:51pm
I am sorry for this malady my friend,
i do not know if it is written in your Bio or not, but anyway, i am sorry
to hear that, i know its hard to interact with people on same frequency...and to be even fairly understood though..
Apology once gain,.
God bless you Asperger
PS/ we poets are all prone to psycho disorder we are a section apart.
i do not know if it is written in your Bio or not, but anyway, i am sorry
to hear that, i know its hard to interact with people on same frequency...and to be even fairly understood though..
Apology once gain,.
God bless you Asperger
PS/ we poets are all prone to psycho disorder we are a section apart.
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Re. Tainted Serenity
31st May 2024 3:32pm
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