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in the rush of desires
her cherished rosebuds
resting on the surface
of white pillow
he came
hit the pink walls
coated his fingers by her lust...
resting on the surface
of white pillow
he came
hit the pink walls
coated his fingers by her lust...
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Re. in the rush of desires
29th May 2024 7:11pm
Re: Re. in the rush of desires
30th May 2024 3:33am
Re. in the rush of desires
29th May 2024 7:12pm
Re: Re. in the rush of desires
30th May 2024 3:33am
Re. in the rush of desires
29th May 2024 8:18pm
Wow a lot of info here .. he came … he hit… he coated … no wonder you’re still breathing
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30th May 2024 3:32am
Re. in the rush of desires
29th May 2024 9:32pm
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30th May 2024 3:26am
Re. in the rush of desires
29th May 2024 10:03pm
Re: Re. in the rush of desires
30th May 2024 3:25am
Re. in the rush of desires
30th May 2024 1:08am
Love it! Nice little erotic micro poem! Sure to get the reader sweaty and ready! 😂
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Re: Re. in the rush of desires
30th May 2024 3:25am
😜 that was my purpose to write this sweet sweaty stuff... Well really appreciate your visit...
Re: Re. in the rush of desires
30th May 2024 3:36am
Re. in the rush of desires
30th May 2024 10:43am
OMG.... It was good for you, I trust
(just in case you missed it, this rhymes with your last line. I could not resist)
(just in case you missed it, this rhymes with your last line. I could not resist)
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Re: Re. in the rush of desires
30th May 2024 10:52am