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Violate Me
come fuck me
like you hate
me i crave to
see the fury
the violence
in your eyes
acting out the
pain and rage
deep inside
let me be a
canvas for
your anger
a punching
bag for your
spite a battle
field of tears
make me beg
you to stop cry
out your name
suffer the rage
for my gladiator
gaining release
from our demons
in this bloody arena
like you hate
me i crave to
see the fury
the violence
in your eyes
acting out the
pain and rage
deep inside
let me be a
canvas for
your anger
a punching
bag for your
spite a battle
field of tears
make me beg
you to stop cry
out your name
suffer the rage
for my gladiator
gaining release
from our demons
in this bloody arena
Author's Note
Fuck me like you hate me.
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Re. Violate Me
29th May 2024 2:06pm
Re: Re. Violate Me
29th May 2024 2:18pm
Re. Violate Me
29th May 2024 2:12pm
You had me at come fuck me. haha love the poem
favorite lines
" me i crave to
see the fury
the violence
in your eyes
acting out the
pain and rage
deep inside
let me be a
canvas for
your anger"
favorite lines
" me i crave to
see the fury
the violence
in your eyes
acting out the
pain and rage
deep inside
let me be a
canvas for
your anger"
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Re: Re. Violate Me
29th May 2024 2:24pm
What's not like about come fuck me? :-D
Thanks for your comment, Fia, I appreciate it.
Thanks for your comment, Fia, I appreciate it.
Re. Violate Me
29th May 2024 2:31pm
Re: Re. Violate Me
29th May 2024 3:14pm
Re. Violate Me
29th May 2024 2:35pm
I think we all crave to be fucked with a rage, but ironically by someone we love.
Powerhouse piece.
I'm digging that image 🔥
Powerhouse piece.
I'm digging that image 🔥
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Re: Re. Violate Me
29th May 2024 3:16pm
That's the irony of it: by someone we love. Honored you think it's a powerhouse piece and dig the picture. I dig it too, big time. Thanks heaps for your visit and comment, I appreciate it.
Re: Re. Violate Me
30th May 2024 5:12am
Re. Violate Me
29th May 2024 5:53pm
Re: Re. Violate Me
30th May 2024 5:12am
Oh you, saying it doesn't work. Thanks heaps for the smiles & the reading list :-)
Re: Re. Violate Me
30th May 2024 5:14am
Re. Violate Me
29th May 2024 7:20pm
This was a hard driving poem that gave excitement as well as trepidation. Such a great piece. It inspired me to try out the genre.
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Re: Re. Violate Me
30th May 2024 5:18am
Your comment blew me away, so honored it inspired you to try out this genre. Thanks heaps.
Re. Violate Me
29th May 2024 9:56pm
Oh I know the feel of this one. A landing place for aggression & releasing the pain unseen. Yup, this is familiar, sis 💖
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Re: Re. Violate Me
30th May 2024 5:20am
So happy to hear this is familiar. Thanks heaps for your comment and support, sis 💖
Re. Violate Me
Anonymous
30th May 2024 8:53am
I'll pretend to be a gentleman even when I know I'm not a gentle man
when the mood strikes..and in regards to this spillage...
I'll politely say...Goddamn woman!!!
when the mood strikes..and in regards to this spillage...
I'll politely say...Goddamn woman!!!
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Re: Re. Violate Me
30th May 2024 1:12pm
Your comments always give me huge smiles.
Honored this one got a "Goddamn woman!!!" out of you :-)
Thanks heaps for your comment, I really appreciate it.
Honored this one got a "Goddamn woman!!!" out of you :-)
Thanks heaps for your comment, I really appreciate it.