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Naked Soul
He gnawed it over in his mind,
how he would invade her kingdom.
Possess all her sums.
Her soul was dressed with the body.
He saw her naked soul, it's all and far.
External battles carve wisdom's scars.
His eyes burrowed through
tattered flesh and bone's soil.
Beyond her crumbling stone walls.
His hand on the door to her existence.
She lacked a shred of resistance.
There was a brilliant spectrum of her energy.
Our understanding of the magic
is still in it's infancy.
But her smile contained an elaborate eternity.
A kingdom beyond possibility.
how he would invade her kingdom.
Possess all her sums.
Her soul was dressed with the body.
He saw her naked soul, it's all and far.
External battles carve wisdom's scars.
His eyes burrowed through
tattered flesh and bone's soil.
Beyond her crumbling stone walls.
His hand on the door to her existence.
She lacked a shred of resistance.
There was a brilliant spectrum of her energy.
Our understanding of the magic
is still in it's infancy.
But her smile contained an elaborate eternity.
A kingdom beyond possibility.
Author's Note
Just some morning thoughts.
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29th May 2024 12:56pm
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Re. Naked Soul
29th May 2024 1:31pm
As we tend to be in love with the soul; some timed the body stands against our utopian dreams..
Nice one
Nice one
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Re. Naked Soul
29th May 2024 1:36pm
I wish we could see past bodies into souls. Thank you for reading and comment!
Re. Naked Soul
29th May 2024 1:56pm
Wow, to have someone See your naked soul is priceless.
Love this piece and especially that last line, amazing write 💕
Love this piece and especially that last line, amazing write 💕
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29th May 2024 2:14pm
Hi! Still waiting for someone to see mine. 😊
Thank you so much for your encouragement. ✨
Thank you so much for your encouragement. ✨
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29th May 2024 6:34pm
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29th May 2024 7:58pm
Hi Sam. I'm so glad you loved this. I value your opinion a lot!
Appreciate it! 🤗
Appreciate it! 🤗
Re. Naked Soul
29th May 2024 7:02pm
Girl what... this line
"His hand on the door to her existence."
Amazing! Awesome poem.
LJ
"His hand on the door to her existence."
Amazing! Awesome poem.
LJ
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29th May 2024 7:57pm
I like that line myself. Thank you so much.
I like that it resonates with people even if it's in a fantasy type way.
I like that it resonates with people even if it's in a fantasy type way.
Re. Naked Soul
29th May 2024 10:34pm
There’s an ethereal element to this, I love it! Especially this line:
“External battles carve wisdom's scars.”
“External battles carve wisdom's scars.”
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29th May 2024 10:50pm
Thank you so much. I do believe our scars are made of wisdom.
I appreciate you checking out!
Enjoy your night 🌙
I appreciate you checking out!
Enjoy your night 🌙
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4th Jun 2024 00:16am
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Re. Naked Soul
5th Jul 2024 5:59am
I like the seemingly "grandeur" spin you put on this in the final part. It's just well-expressed from extremity to extremity, in the need for love, and the various things that need to happen, in such a circumstance. You capture multiple angles well - not only the protagonist's needs. Anyway, good job.
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6th Jul 2024 10:00am