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The Intimacy of Your Smile
It could be you
Or you
Or someone else
Felt like writing a love poem
Your smile ?
Well it does things to me
I’m always hoping you’re smiling at me ..
Or you
Or someone else
Felt like writing a love poem
Your smile ?
Well it does things to me
I’m always hoping you’re smiling at me ..
Author's Note
Painting by Poetspeak
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Re. The Intimacy of Your Smile
28th May 2024 8:45pm
Re: Re. The Intimacy of Your Smile
28th May 2024 8:47pm
Yeah
Kinda minimalist
I’ll see what I can do
Thanks on the art !!
Appreciate V
Kinda minimalist
I’ll see what I can do
Thanks on the art !!
Appreciate V
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28th May 2024 8:50pm
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28th May 2024 8:56pm
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28th May 2024 9:00pm
Re. The Intimacy of Your Smile
28th May 2024 10:03pm
The interesting thing about this one is that it reminds me of feathers on the breeze...& you left the smiler open to interpretation. Seems a pretty perfect pairing to me!
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Re: Re. The Intimacy of Your Smile
28th May 2024 10:07pm
I wanted this one to be universal for lovers.
There could be one or many the writer is talking about.
Suddenly today I needed to write a love poem ..
Thx Willow
There could be one or many the writer is talking about.
Suddenly today I needed to write a love poem ..
Thx Willow
Re. The Intimacy of Your Smile
29th May 2024 00:39am
Some nice art with the verse. I'm more start and stop with both so its nice to somebody's still getting it done!
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Re: Re. The Intimacy of Your Smile
29th May 2024 00:41am
Wow AJ
What a great comment !!
I truly appreciate your praise on the art and poem.
Thank you !!
What a great comment !!
I truly appreciate your praise on the art and poem.
Thank you !!
Re: Re. The Intimacy of Your Smile
29th May 2024 00:57am
Hey, I love art and the creative endeavour. Seeing someone enjoying what their doing. Hat's off to you!
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Re: Re. The Intimacy of Your Smile
29th May 2024 1:04am
I was an artist long before writing poetry and the combo thereof is a natural win !!
Lately having a really good time doing collages. Finding great uses for paintings I no longer like and cutting them up and recycling what parts work. My canvas is often cut up Amazon boxes ..
Appreciate you AJ
Lately having a really good time doing collages. Finding great uses for paintings I no longer like and cutting them up and recycling what parts work. My canvas is often cut up Amazon boxes ..
Appreciate you AJ
Re: Re. The Intimacy of Your Smile
29th May 2024 1:10am
We don't often hit up each others posts but we go back a ways, and I always appreciated your talent and honesty.
Maybe one day Hell will freeze over and I'll finally finish another picture - maybe!
Maybe one day Hell will freeze over and I'll finally finish another picture - maybe!
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Re: Re. The Intimacy of Your Smile
29th May 2024 1:20am
Re. The Intimacy of Your Smile
29th May 2024 1:39am
THE FUCK?! You getting romantic? What?!
It's a good look on you.
The painting is cool shit, and I seriously enjoy the way your brain takes texture and pairs it with theme and then reinvents it in poetry.
BIG like.
It's a good look on you.
The painting is cool shit, and I seriously enjoy the way your brain takes texture and pairs it with theme and then reinvents it in poetry.
BIG like.
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Re: Re. The Intimacy of Your Smile
Artist first
Words 11 years ago started to flow and I never looked back. Been a great ride
Yeah, I am a romantic believe it or not. A time and place for all things girl and boy. But let’s not let the cat out of the bag. Might ruin my rogue persona ..
Appreciate you luv …
Thx
Words 11 years ago started to flow and I never looked back. Been a great ride
Yeah, I am a romantic believe it or not. A time and place for all things girl and boy. But let’s not let the cat out of the bag. Might ruin my rogue persona ..
Appreciate you luv …
Thx
Re. The Intimacy of Your Smile
29th May 2024 4:47am
Dear PS,
When you show your romantic side I get a bit dreamy. I enjoyed the poem. I think each of us could insert ourselves to think when we smile we’re all a bit special to you. 😊
The painting is beautiful. There’s a flow and movement to this one that’s like a gentle breeze. Really lovely.
H🌷
When you show your romantic side I get a bit dreamy. I enjoyed the poem. I think each of us could insert ourselves to think when we smile we’re all a bit special to you. 😊
The painting is beautiful. There’s a flow and movement to this one that’s like a gentle breeze. Really lovely.
H🌷
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Re: Re. The Intimacy of Your Smile
29th May 2024 11:06am
Dear H,
It was a beautiful Spring day and suddenly I needed to reflect on that beauty and aura.
Wrote the poem and then looked through my paintings to find one sunny in nature and indeed that cool breeze ....
A smile is worth a thousand words, no truer statement...
I'm flashing you my sly and wry smile H, did you see it ???
BIG THANKS H,
🤠x
It was a beautiful Spring day and suddenly I needed to reflect on that beauty and aura.
Wrote the poem and then looked through my paintings to find one sunny in nature and indeed that cool breeze ....
A smile is worth a thousand words, no truer statement...
I'm flashing you my sly and wry smile H, did you see it ???
BIG THANKS H,
🤠x
Re. The Intimacy of Your Smile
29th May 2024 10:33am
PoetSpeak writing a love poem, now how about that ;-)
I love the softness of the painting, it fits the smile and the vibe.
I love the softness of the painting, it fits the smile and the vibe.
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Re: Re. The Intimacy of Your Smile
29th May 2024 11:08am
Yes D !
A PS love poem.
I've written lots of them. Spring brings them on and other matters of state.
Glad you liked it.
Totally wrote itself ..
Appreciate you !
A PS love poem.
I've written lots of them. Spring brings them on and other matters of state.
Glad you liked it.
Totally wrote itself ..
Appreciate you !
Re. The Intimacy of Your Smile
29th May 2024 5:47pm
if you are the reason for someone's smile then that person is very precious for you....
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29th May 2024 6:04pm
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29th May 2024 6:07pm
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29th May 2024 6:08pm
Re. The Intimacy of Your Smile
29th May 2024 9:13pm
You treat her with Kindness and Respect and her world is yours. Keep on writing.
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29th May 2024 9:26pm
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9th Aug 2024 4:09pm
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9th Aug 2024 5:08pm