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If I Say
If I say
I love you
Does that mean
You do
There is no
word better
Then this
I utter
To say
what I mean
When you are
not keen
To give me
a kiss
When I say
I miss You
I really do
When you say
I love you
Does that mean
I don’t
I often
wonder
If words you
Blunder
And say
Mean
Anything
To you
When you say
I miss You
You really don’t
I love you
Does that mean
You do
There is no
word better
Then this
I utter
To say
what I mean
When you are
not keen
To give me
a kiss
When I say
I miss You
I really do
When you say
I love you
Does that mean
I don’t
I often
wonder
If words you
Blunder
And say
Mean
Anything
To you
When you say
I miss You
You really don’t
Author's Note
Oh yes… I’m talking to you…
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25th May 2024 10:12pm
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26th May 2024 1:58am
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Anonymous
26th May 2024 11:33am
Trust…love…trust…love…
It’s all one big jumblefuck. I get it.
It’s all one big jumblefuck. I get it.
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Anonymous
27th May 2024 00:24am
Not your poem, not by any means. It’s spot on
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26th May 2024 9:47pm
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31st May 2024 3:24pm
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31st May 2024 3:29pm
Well in your profile you wear red and you keep dancing with that idiot who I don’t know (who I want to strangle by the way) .. now YOU tell me if you are or you’re not… REALLY FAITH
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31st May 2024 3:44pm