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Videotape
Let's get this
shit on tape
the steam
and heat
we create
doggy style
spin cycle
sixty nine
lazy grind
camel ride
rider astride
the butterfly
and spider
the bicycle
pillow driver
sidewinder
big dipper
the cowgirl
and reverse
(side chick)
the push up
& countertop
donkey punch
rocking horse
the dropbox
and socker
the jockey
lap dance
teddy bear
layer cakes
happy baby
and elevator
pearly gates
& trunk space
the solo snakes
now go get a break
shit on tape
the steam
and heat
we create
doggy style
spin cycle
sixty nine
lazy grind
camel ride
rider astride
the butterfly
and spider
the bicycle
pillow driver
sidewinder
big dipper
the cowgirl
and reverse
(side chick)
the push up
& countertop
donkey punch
rocking horse
the dropbox
and socker
the jockey
lap dance
teddy bear
layer cakes
happy baby
and elevator
pearly gates
& trunk space
the solo snakes
now go get a break
Author's Note
Inspired by Prince - Get Off.
...a little assonance play...
https://youtu.be/6f4BwQFF-Os
...a little assonance play...
https://youtu.be/6f4BwQFF-Os
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24th May 2024 3:58pm
Thanks heaps for the heads up, went over & over this piece, but missed it? Corrected it :-)
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25th May 2024 9:13am
Good question. I think great poetry doesn't need an image, but also that an image can give more depth. I added images since I started posting, so it would feel weird to not add one.
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24th May 2024 3:24pm
I need me someone to tick off this list! I read this & suddenly alone seems boring. The taping will add some heat to the already blazing inferno. Go get 'em, sis! 💖
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24th May 2024 4:03pm
That would certainly add some heat. I'll let you know when it's on tape. Thanks heaps, sis 💖
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24th May 2024 5:25pm
Only on my phone. I learned the hard way. Somewhere out there...never mind.
Sexy as hell write. Love your enthusiasm and boldness, as always, D.
Hot pic. Is that you?
Sexy as hell write. Love your enthusiasm and boldness, as always, D.
Hot pic. Is that you?
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25th May 2024 9:16am
Oh, that sucks! So happy you like this write and no, it's not me... could be.
Thanks heaps for your visit and comment, I appreciate you :-)
Thanks heaps for your visit and comment, I appreciate you :-)
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24th May 2024 5:26pm
Ok do you have my Karma Sutra Deck? Prince was so erotic. Love it Fia xoxo
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25th May 2024 9:21am
Lol, I don't have your deck. It's knowledge, experience and google ;-)
Thanks heaps for your comment and the reading list, Fia, I appreciate it 💕
Thanks heaps for your comment and the reading list, Fia, I appreciate it 💕
Re. Videotape
25th May 2024 4:30pm
"... Let's get this shit on tape... "
This shit ?... That's not shit... Not shit at all...
... ...
That is human love being perfected.
This shit ?... That's not shit... Not shit at all...
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That is human love being perfected.
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25th May 2024 5:12pm
Thanks for saying this is human love being perfected, can't ask for more.
And as for shit: one should never take things too seriously ;-)
And as for shit: one should never take things too seriously ;-)
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