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Change Your Wind
Some people are only airy bubbles
Sting them, see,they are only wind !
And some of them are even soap bubbles
Too much colourful to mask their kind
Some faces inspire trouble and sadness
They just make you curse your day of birth
Some others are real oozing kindness
They aspire for tranquility and mirth
So, what have you gained little creature.
What have you gleaned from an earthly life
Or do you believe given a chance in the future
Live your day, push far the limits of rhyme
Tears and pills, and anti-depression Meds
Today's relief, tomorrow worsens your grief
And the late nights wakings,sad in your bed
Add much more tension to make your life brief
New ways, new rituals, new thoughts new fellows
New places ,new times, new habits, less medicines
Changing a deeply rooted habit needs heart you know
Needs a cleaning fight, like being in quarantine
An upside-down revolution in your wretched life
Anew cataclysm in the mind set, you are nailed
An other angle to observe, and take a global view
"Things in the mirror look different than they appear"
Sting them, see,they are only wind !
And some of them are even soap bubbles
Too much colourful to mask their kind
Some faces inspire trouble and sadness
They just make you curse your day of birth
Some others are real oozing kindness
They aspire for tranquility and mirth
So, what have you gained little creature.
What have you gleaned from an earthly life
Or do you believe given a chance in the future
Live your day, push far the limits of rhyme
Tears and pills, and anti-depression Meds
Today's relief, tomorrow worsens your grief
And the late nights wakings,sad in your bed
Add much more tension to make your life brief
New ways, new rituals, new thoughts new fellows
New places ,new times, new habits, less medicines
Changing a deeply rooted habit needs heart you know
Needs a cleaning fight, like being in quarantine
An upside-down revolution in your wretched life
Anew cataclysm in the mind set, you are nailed
An other angle to observe, and take a global view
"Things in the mirror look different than they appear"
Published 23rd May 2024
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23rd May 2024 4:17pm
"New ways, new rituals, new thoughts new fellows
New places ,new times, new habits, less medicines
Changing a deeply rooted habit needs heart you know
Needs a cleaning fight, like being in quarantine"
That is intense. I love it. Fia xoxo
New places ,new times, new habits, less medicines
Changing a deeply rooted habit needs heart you know
Needs a cleaning fight, like being in quarantine"
That is intense. I love it. Fia xoxo
23rd May 2024 4:39pm
Indeed, my friend,
changing a habit is a real fight, like being addicted to drugs,
to wrong methods, to false thinking ways, and more and more..
Truth needs A sacrifice to be raised to view..
Thank you very much Fia, god bless you, for ever.
changing a habit is a real fight, like being addicted to drugs,
to wrong methods, to false thinking ways, and more and more..
Truth needs A sacrifice to be raised to view..
Thank you very much Fia, god bless you, for ever.
24th May 2024 1:49pm
24th May 2024 2:08pm
Thanks you my friend, just commenting even with negatives
means a lot to me......a poets presence on a fellow's page
is the great pleasure ever..
we converge on some points and differ on some, even with our
own selves, thats the beauty of the human beings.
Thank you heaps for your sweet feedback.Regards.
means a lot to me......a poets presence on a fellow's page
is the great pleasure ever..
we converge on some points and differ on some, even with our
own selves, thats the beauty of the human beings.
Thank you heaps for your sweet feedback.Regards.
