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Find Me
To be looked at like yours is the only existence
there ever was.
To be known down to your bone.
Every touch has the electric intensity
of the very first and the very last.
You feel immediate and a thousand years.
Lips colliding twisted
with soft euphoric kisses.
We were alchemy.
My beacon eyes
flood love's iridescent light.
Find me.......
there ever was.
To be known down to your bone.
Every touch has the electric intensity
of the very first and the very last.
You feel immediate and a thousand years.
Lips colliding twisted
with soft euphoric kisses.
We were alchemy.
My beacon eyes
flood love's iridescent light.
Find me.......
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Re. Find Me
20th May 2024 11:39pm
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20th May 2024 11:46pm
Re. Find Me
20th May 2024 11:47pm
Powerful. Emotional, Heartfelt. Your words captivate the audience immediately. Well done, amazing visual!!
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20th May 2024 11:50pm
Wow. That's really nice, thank you. Love isn't really my fortay, but I tried, lol.
I really appreciate the lovely comments.
I really appreciate the lovely comments.
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21st May 2024 9:09am
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Anonymous
21st May 2024 3:40pm
This so perfectly encapsulates that longing for...connection beyond words. Beacon eyes...brilliant! That last line...everything
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21st May 2024 6:38pm
Yes, I think we all yearn for that truly deep connection. I like the beacon eyes too.
Thanks so much for checking out, I'm glad you liked it. 😊
Thanks so much for checking out, I'm glad you liked it. 😊
Re. Find Me
22nd May 2024 2:57am
How tender, yet an inviting lure towards the one you desire.
This can be used as a spell perhaps, and they will succumb!
What a great read tonight!
This can be used as a spell perhaps, and they will succumb!
What a great read tonight!
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22nd May 2024 7:12am
Re. Find Me
22nd May 2024 6:52pm
Hello mine friend; this was written very well... Felt like a love letter,,, take good care: deadwolf
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Re. Find Me
5th Jul 2024 5:37am
Very expressive and communicative, in an emotional and metaphorical sort of way, as if you're speaking to a lover yet to find, heh. I feel as though this is you more in your natural form, as the expressions flow fluently, and smooth aspects of aesthetics tie in a certain familiarity. Overall, great job.
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