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Magic Deer
I was habitually lost
in a muck of random thoughts.
I approached the open front door.
My heart was magically floored.
A big deer stood close to the porch.
Head on he stared gently at me.
Into me, through me.
A creature of equal strength and grace.
Could he be memorizing my face?
Or was it the fresh flowers,
that he wanted a taste?
Poised motionless,
for what seemed so long.
He sprang forth into the back woods,
but the magic was not gone.
No need for a single human word.
A spiritual peace was formed.
And while I slept, nested in bed,
the fresh flowers lost their heads.
in a muck of random thoughts.
I approached the open front door.
My heart was magically floored.
A big deer stood close to the porch.
Head on he stared gently at me.
Into me, through me.
A creature of equal strength and grace.
Could he be memorizing my face?
Or was it the fresh flowers,
that he wanted a taste?
Poised motionless,
for what seemed so long.
He sprang forth into the back woods,
but the magic was not gone.
No need for a single human word.
A spiritual peace was formed.
And while I slept, nested in bed,
the fresh flowers lost their heads.
Author's Note
This really happened except the deer hasn't munched
on the flowers......yet. 😊 🦌
on the flowers......yet. 😊 🦌
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Re. Magic Deer
23rd May 2024 9:48am
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23rd May 2024 9:54am
Hi Faith. The moment was magic. I was headed out the door and this beautiful silent stoic creature
was just staring at me. So close to the house.....and flowers, lol. When I see a deer, I think it's a sign from my dad who passed on.
Thx so much for lovely comments. I'm glad you enjoyed.
Have a wonderful day!
was just staring at me. So close to the house.....and flowers, lol. When I see a deer, I think it's a sign from my dad who passed on.
Thx so much for lovely comments. I'm glad you enjoyed.
Have a wonderful day!
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23rd May 2024 10:01am
I thoroughly enjoyed and even more so after hearing it reminded you of your dad. When I was a kid we lived on a farm. One day, I opened the kitchen window and there stood there looking in at me. It was a thrilling thing for me and I called out to my Mom to come see it. Thanks for bringing back such a wonderful memory for me 💕
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23rd May 2024 10:06am
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23rd May 2024 10:58am
Deers are such beautiful creatures, their big eyes mesmerizing.
I don't have words to describe how much I love this piece 💕
I don't have words to describe how much I love this piece 💕
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23rd May 2024 11:14am
Hi! Thank you. I had no words, just a sense of peace looking at those memorizing eyes.
I'm so happy you liked it.
I'm so happy you liked it.
Re. Magic Deer
23rd May 2024 11:13am
Oh yes, the deer that came to visit you...Tranquil, beautiful, real and full of life. Well done Debbie. Your poems captivate the outdoors so wonderfully.
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23rd May 2024 11:20am
Thank you, the outdoors captivates me.
Maybe I'm a modern day Thoreau, haha - NOT
Maybe I'm a modern day Thoreau, haha - NOT
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23rd May 2024 3:44pm
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23rd May 2024 3:52pm
Thank you, it's amazing when we are given glimpses into their world.
I was reading elephants are the most sacred animal - You've seen them!
I was reading elephants are the most sacred animal - You've seen them!
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Anonymous
23rd May 2024 10:40pm
I've seen them in our local cemetery. They really are amazing creatures. You want to go up and pet them but you know they'll run away.
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23rd May 2024 10:43pm
Hi. Thx for checking out. My nephew from Alaska thought a deer was a little horse, lol
They don't have deer, just moose where they live.
I think deer are magical creatures.
They don't have deer, just moose where they live.
I think deer are magical creatures.
Re. Magic Deer
5th Jul 2024 5:40am
Sounds incredible to see a deer so close! I've seen deer up close, and they're so graceful, and quiet. You ponder some of what you took from the experience, and it translates quite well. A very tranquil experience indeed, is that of a close encounter with deer. Thanks for sharing!
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5th Jul 2024 11:55am