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I love Making You Cum
I love making you cum
The way your body trembles
Under my touch, like a leaf
Quivering in the wind
Your moans, a symphony
Rising and falling with each
Eager thrust, each tender kiss
That sends you spiraling
I live for the way your eyes
Gaze into mine, a storm
Of desire and satisfaction
Brewing beneath the surface
In those moments, nothing else
Exists, just you and me
Lost in the throes of passion
A dance of ecstasy and release
I love making you cum
Because in those stolen moments
I feel the depths of your soul
And know that I am home.
The way your body trembles
Under my touch, like a leaf
Quivering in the wind
Your moans, a symphony
Rising and falling with each
Eager thrust, each tender kiss
That sends you spiraling
I live for the way your eyes
Gaze into mine, a storm
Of desire and satisfaction
Brewing beneath the surface
In those moments, nothing else
Exists, just you and me
Lost in the throes of passion
A dance of ecstasy and release
I love making you cum
Because in those stolen moments
I feel the depths of your soul
And know that I am home.
Published 13th May 2024
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13th May 2024 1:39pm
25th May 2024 3:42am
Aww thank you so much for your sweetest feedback...I hope you have a wonderful weekend <3
25th May 2024 4:56am
13th May 2024 6:54pm
Favourite lines (for what I would see as mark of the thrill of the score)
I feel the depths of your soul
And know that I am home.
I feel the depths of your soul
And know that I am home.
25th May 2024 3:51am
13th May 2024 9:38pm
Not as much as I love you making me!
Oh wow... you got the juices flowing.
Beautiful and sensuously erotic...
Oh wow... you got the juices flowing.
Beautiful and sensuously erotic...
25th May 2024 3:53am
Wow this is a pleasure to share... thank you so much for the hot wonderful feedback... I hope you enjoy the weekend <3
