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Candlelight And Secrets
I hate the morning birdsong
for that brings the dawn
and unwanted sun
i'm begging
don't let the night end
or the dreams of you die
give me the dark
where our secrets thrive
only light I wish to see
is candlelight....
and you
for that brings the dawn
and unwanted sun
i'm begging
don't let the night end
or the dreams of you die
give me the dark
where our secrets thrive
only light I wish to see
is candlelight....
and you
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13th May 2024 11:14am
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13th May 2024 11:17am
Beautiful poem. I'm not sure about the sun never making an appearance since I love the sunlight but the night can be majestic.
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Anonymous
13th May 2024 3:41pm
Heyyyy...I understand the mood.
Some days be different than others...
Some days be different than others...
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