Vigil

Such a talent. I stand in awe. Your ability to transport a reader into these moments with you is impeccable. This is a vulnerable piece. Morose yet absolutely beaitiful. Masterfully done as usual Missy.

Thank you. One tries. 😄
Morose is a good word for this kind of state I think. Excellent choice.

Thanks for stopping by

-M

 Wow. What a perfectly expressed write. The descriptors in the lines creating such an awesome scene for the reader to place themselves within.
 This is truly top tier writing.  You're known for it, but I still get thrilled by your new stuff.
Very inspiring to us readers.  
 Don't stop.

Cheers Styx. I’m glad you found something worth sticking around for.

Appreciate the fuck out of your comment and presence here

-M

Very deep cutting lines
In a glittering stream of memories
It fades in and out
So beautiful...!


♡

Thanks for stopping by

-M

Agonising and human  

Relatable to love and loss we all experience even though it’s your story, I as a reader can’t help but be pulled unit he emotional undercurrent and remember the one I left, the one that left me and all the times you wanted that last chance to say a good bye or even waiting for a word to spring unbidden from the ether to spark something in your chest one last time


The subtle rhyme of womb and tomb is so well placed you barely hear it as a whisper and an echo. It’s a perfect use has the sound of the same echo you would expect inside a tomb (onomatopoeia (or however it’s spelt)  

The dance is as old a metaphor as we have and you use it deftly as in undertone to emotion dancing below the surface in our own heads a cacophony is raging and the rest of the word is doing it’s own thing caring little.

You really took some of yourself and smeared it on a page, and you made it bruised and battered and beautiful

Thanks for this.

You’ve picked out a lot of the bits that I was hoping for so yeah, I appreciate that. Onomatopoeia is a big word for this time of the morning before I’ve had my first cup of tea, but sure, we’ll go with that.

I’ll take bruised and battered and beautiful. Sets the tone for this piece well.

Cheers very much

-M

I am speechless, thank you for sharing.