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The doctor is usually wrong
Obscene Vision
Life is spelled wrong
Doesn't sound right
Can't hear any screams
Can't smell fear of burning bodies
Can't see any pain or frustration
Nope, it's just not natural
I guess I need to go back on my medication
Doctor's orders!
Life is spelled wrong
Doesn't sound right
Can't hear any screams
Can't smell fear of burning bodies
Can't see any pain or frustration
Nope, it's just not natural
I guess I need to go back on my medication
Doctor's orders!
Published 11th May 2024
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11th May 2024 11:38am
I can relate to this... until they got my meds right... felt like I was wrapped in gauze... nicely done...
11th May 2024 12:10pm
11th May 2024 12:03pm
I've had a million doctors wrong,
until a few were right.
Very creative write.
until a few were right.
Very creative write.
11th May 2024 12:10pm
I hate doctors! Unless their holistic in their approach. Appreciate the comments!
11th May 2024 12:40pm
In my 20's I was cured of unexplainable chronic pain by acupuncture
Holistic was the way to go.
Holistic was the way to go.
11th May 2024 4:09pm
11th May 2024 3:12pm
Very creative, and for many of us, relatable write. Medication is such a gamble.
11th May 2024 4:09pm
11th May 2024 4:52pm
That's why it's called "Practicing Medicine." Great write, as usual. Hugs and love, Oral
11th May 2024 4:53pm
11th May 2024 4:56pm
11th May 2024 5:01pm
Damn right! Keep them all away as much as possible. Their white collared drug peddlers!
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