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Impoverished Addict
Ghetto calling
So hungry
So thirsty
On fire
Calling your name
Rancid stench
Glass shard womb
The atmosphere suffocates
The voices
The fear
Monkey climbing up your leg
If the shoe fits, curl up and die in it
So hungry
So thirsty
On fire
Calling your name
Rancid stench
Glass shard womb
The atmosphere suffocates
The voices
The fear
Monkey climbing up your leg
If the shoe fits, curl up and die in it
Published 10th May 2024
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10th May 2024 11:27am
This is edgy and raw with a real captured feel of desolation and desperation. You nailed it as war as bringing the tragic to life, I definitely felt the intensity.
10th May 2024 11:29am
Thanks Thor. Appreciate the detailed comments here. Thanks my friend.
13th May 2024 00:04am
Hello mine friend, great piece of writing... If had more room on readin list, would add it, but am at maximun... take good care man: Ed
13th May 2024 00:28am
I'm doing well, how are you? All good Ed. Thanks for the comments & read.
