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Primal Sex
it was like the
beast, stuck in
his cage was
finally set free
pushing me up
against the wall
& Choking me
i'm not subby
or obedient by
nature it truly
is something
a guy ignites
and damn he
lights my fires
delighted i was
the one who got
him unleashed
gave the beast
room to breathe
together we grow
a primal trip for sure
beast, stuck in
his cage was
finally set free
pushing me up
against the wall
& Choking me
i'm not subby
or obedient by
nature it truly
is something
a guy ignites
and damn he
lights my fires
delighted i was
the one who got
him unleashed
gave the beast
room to breathe
together we grow
a primal trip for sure
Published 9th May 2024
Author's Note
And our Story continues.
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9th May 2024 2:01pm
9th May 2024 2:48pm
9th May 2024 2:17pm
Oooph...powerful primal punch in this one! If there's to be sequel, warn me so I can get some coffee in me first, sis. 🔥
9th May 2024 2:48pm
The smiles you gave me, will warn you next time. Thanks heaps for your comment, sis 💖
9th May 2024 2:50pm
9th May 2024 2:33pm
Seriously hot stuff! The thoughts you imparted in my mind made me envious!
JJ
JJ
9th May 2024 2:52pm
Seriously hot stuff is a great compliment, thanks heaps for your comment JJ :-)
9th May 2024 6:34pm
I adore your passion and honesty. We like what we like.
And ain’t it grand?
Love this, D.
And ain’t it grand?
Love this, D.
10th May 2024 7:34am
We like what we like and we are who we are.
Thanks heaps for your comment and reading list.
Thanks heaps for your comment and reading list.
Anonymous
9th May 2024 7:33pm
Whew...hot sex on a platter this vibe is
''
i'm not subby
or obedient by
nature it truly
is something
a guy ignites ''
The stand out line here.
...and that pick is steamy as hell
With moments like these , one can't help but to ask
...ain't life grand?
''
i'm not subby
or obedient by
nature it truly
is something
a guy ignites ''
The stand out line here.
...and that pick is steamy as hell
With moments like these , one can't help but to ask
...ain't life grand?
10th May 2024 7:40am
So happy to hear you like the vibe, Naajir.
Finding the right picture was very difficult, but once I found this one I thought: Yes, this is it! Thanks heaps for your comment, I appreciate you 🙏🏻
Finding the right picture was very difficult, but once I found this one I thought: Yes, this is it! Thanks heaps for your comment, I appreciate you 🙏🏻
9th May 2024 11:57pm
10th May 2024 7:42am
10th May 2024 12:52pm
William Blake asks the question, "Too much or not enough?"
What is the therapeutic level of intimacy? How can we get enough without breaking or starving to death?
How hot is it that we can be burned over and over and not be consumed?
What is the therapeutic level of intimacy? How can we get enough without breaking or starving to death?
How hot is it that we can be burned over and over and not be consumed?
10th May 2024 1:53pm
10th May 2024 12:54pm
10th May 2024 1:58pm
12th May 2024 12:45pm
Everything about this write....captures my primal urges....
So much to be said about your pen .....
So much to be said about your pen .....
12th May 2024 1:00pm
That's an amazing compliment, I'm a bit speechless.
Thanks heaps for dropping by, PoetSpeak.
Thanks heaps for dropping by, PoetSpeak.
19th May 2024 10:08am
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