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cotton candy
and moving
down
below her
when
i began,
her
inhibition
disappeared
into
my mouth
as quickly
and easily
as
cotton
candy
Published 9th May 2024
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9th May 2024 6:24am
9th May 2024 10:30am
9th May 2024 7:26am
Makes one guess exactly how and when the "inhibition disappeared in my mouth" - was it at the mouth kissing stage or (as initially thought) as he gave her head down south?
9th May 2024 10:33am
you are right, this could be taken with different thoughts. i will revise my poem. thank you Solomon.
9th May 2024 12:46pm
Do you mind if I use cotton candy to describe that down south?! You have just invented a new word for that.. wow… congrats
9th May 2024 12:50pm
9th May 2024 6:43pm
Ooh wheeeeee.
I agree with Sam. Bravo on the new lady parts word, wolf.
Delish poem, btw.
I agree with Sam. Bravo on the new lady parts word, wolf.
Delish poem, btw.
9th May 2024 7:08pm
10th May 2024 7:23pm
Fantastically sweet. I’ll take a pink cotton candy plead…twirled around the stick
11th May 2024 00:36am
