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the rain

the rain fell today

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and I didn't bother to call
an
ambulance
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Written by buddhakitty

Published 9th May 2024

#suffering

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Re. the rain

Styxian

9th May 2024 3:07am

So simply brilliant.
So clever.
You don't need to write long sentences. You go straight to the exclamation points.

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buddhakitty

9th May 2024 5:14pm

Thank you so much, Styxian.!!!

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Re. the rain

Samnash (Sam Nash)

9th May 2024 1:52pm

Oh wow� this one is amazingly different�

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buddhakitty

9th May 2024 5:13pm

Thank you, Samnash. I am humbled by your praise.

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Re. the rain

Her

9th May 2024 6:44pm

I�m still trying to pick my mouth up from the floor.
Brilliant, your words are, just brilliant.

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buddhakitty

9th May 2024 6:46pm

Thank you, Her. I am deeply grateful and humbled.

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Re. the rain

Betty

10th May 2024 2:23am

This was droll and delicious. Well played with those words!

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buddhakitty

10th May 2024 2:24am

Many thanks, Betty.

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Re. the rain

wallyroo92

19th Jul 2024 4:15pm

Oh Bk, you deliver quite the punch with brevity.

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buddhakitty

20th Jul 2024 2:34am

Thank you, wally. Much appreciated.

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buddhakitty.

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