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thorns
how do
i guess
truly the
beauty
of
a rose,
should i
judge it?
for
my darling,
this art
wails with
every bud,
numbered
petals,
the thorns
also are
your love.
i guess
truly the
beauty
of
a rose,
should i
judge it?
for
my darling,
this art
wails with
every bud,
numbered
petals,
the thorns
also are
your love.
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5th May 2024 4:00am
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Re. thorns
6th May 2024 1:35pm
I agree with everyone here. It's beautiful.
The throns and petals are part of it...
♡
The throns and petals are part of it...
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6th May 2024 3:09pm
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Anonymous
6th May 2024 4:20pm
Love comes with pain...beautifully written
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