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Re. Sweven
2nd May 2024 10:35am
Very cool. This is a work of art. The format & presentation are awesome!
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Thank you sir. Just doing a bit of experimenting. Glad you liked it.
Re. Sweven
2nd May 2024 1:28pm
Re: Re. Sweven
2nd May 2024 1:32pm
Thank you Fia! I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment.
Re. Sweven
2nd May 2024 7:44pm
ooo.. that was nice... how did you add the red font color to the post? I didn't know you can do that
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Re: Re. Sweven
2nd May 2024 8:07pm
You can't. As far as I can tell, which I think is really dumb. I had to make it using another program then save it as amln image and upload it that way. That's also a weird process. You have to upload the poem first then edit in order to even get the add multimedia button to show up.
Thanks for checking it out. Glad you liked it.
Thanks for checking it out. Glad you liked it.
Re: Re. Sweven
4th May 2024 10:44pm
Re. Sweven
5th May 2024 1:06pm
Hello,
I thought this was a fascinating poem, the word sweven is also old Norse , it can mean sleep or journey.
It read a bit as a macabre though at the same time it seemed to be connected to a lifestream.
thanks for sharing, greets
R
I thought this was a fascinating poem, the word sweven is also old Norse , it can mean sleep or journey.
It read a bit as a macabre though at the same time it seemed to be connected to a lifestream.
thanks for sharing, greets
R
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Re: Re. Sweven
5th May 2024 1:50pm
Yes, the word sweven can be traced back to the old norse söfn. It's usage here being derived from middle english and with the intent of meaning a vision or premonition with a possibility of being prophetic.
I could share the full intent behind this piece but I rather enjoy the idea of a reader having their own individual interpretation. I think that my explanation of the usage of the word sweven will probably give enough insight.
I appreciate you taking the time to read and also providing feedback on what you took away from your reading of this piece. Thank you.
I could share the full intent behind this piece but I rather enjoy the idea of a reader having their own individual interpretation. I think that my explanation of the usage of the word sweven will probably give enough insight.
I appreciate you taking the time to read and also providing feedback on what you took away from your reading of this piece. Thank you.