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Death Makes A Housecall
Come on now its time to die
Kiss your wife and kids goodbye
Tell them all you need to say
Cuz you won't see another day
You wished for it and now it's time
No backing out, your ass is mine
Im here because I heard your pleas
No use in begging, get off your knees
You asked for this, so here I am
Time for a slaughter and you're the lamb
Kiss your wife and kids goodbye
Tell them all you need to say
Cuz you won't see another day
You wished for it and now it's time
No backing out, your ass is mine
Im here because I heard your pleas
No use in begging, get off your knees
You asked for this, so here I am
Time for a slaughter and you're the lamb
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Re. Death Makes A Housecsll
29th Apr 2024 7:51am
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Re. Death Makes A Housecall
29th Apr 2024 5:30pm
I think they should add another button (other than like) to this ... maybe (I'm scared shitless button).. this is fucking dark stuff
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Re: Re. Death Makes A Housecall
29th Apr 2024 5:50pm
That's a really good idea. I like the way you think Sam. Appreciate the read.
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29th Apr 2024 10:20pm
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Re: Re. Death Makes A Housecall
29th Apr 2024 8:27pm
Thanks for commenting. Its always cool to see how different people interpret your writes.
When I created this one, the thought was to speak from the point of view of the incarnation of Death. He has come to collect from someone who had wished for death and in the final moment, the reality sets in for the intended target. But its too late. Death must make his claim.
When I created this one, the thought was to speak from the point of view of the incarnation of Death. He has come to collect from someone who had wished for death and in the final moment, the reality sets in for the intended target. But its too late. Death must make his claim.
Anonymous
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Re. Death Makes A Housecall
4th May 2024 9:32pm
👏 👏 👏!! Nice 👌 work this reminds me of a poem I wrote called A.O.D'S angels of death!!
Great 👍 work again 👏 my friend 👏 please 🙏 keep on writing ✍ ok peace ✌ and blessings 🙏 always
Great 👍 work again 👏 my friend 👏 please 🙏 keep on writing ✍ ok peace ✌ and blessings 🙏 always
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Re: Re. Death Makes A Housecall
4th May 2024 9:33pm
Thanks brother. Appreciate you. Did you post A.O.D. here? If so, I'll take a look
Re: Re. Death Makes A Housecall
4th May 2024 10:55pm
Yes 👍 I did post it up here my friend check it out when you get a chance ok 👌 please let me know 🙏 what you think 🤔
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