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Infinitely Irate
I'm so angry
I want to kick god in the nuts
shoot the moon out of the sky
and drain the oceans with mighty sucks of a bendy straw
I'm so pissed
I want to incise my brain
decapitate my memories
and watch them run around like little idiots
spurting blood from their necks
I'm so peeved
I want to wad up the Earth
throw it in the fucking trash
annihilate everything
stop time
and call for a big
effing
massive
do over.
that will get laughed away into entropy.
I want to kick god in the nuts
shoot the moon out of the sky
and drain the oceans with mighty sucks of a bendy straw
I'm so pissed
I want to incise my brain
decapitate my memories
and watch them run around like little idiots
spurting blood from their necks
I'm so peeved
I want to wad up the Earth
throw it in the fucking trash
annihilate everything
stop time
and call for a big
effing
massive
do over.
that will get laughed away into entropy.
Author's Note
I'm actually in a decent mood. This poem just came to me.
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Re. Infinitely Irate
26th Apr 2024 5:59am
Dear PD,
On any given day I could subscribe to this earthly treatment. I really enjoyed the dark energy. And the formatting- very effective. Great write. H🌷
On any given day I could subscribe to this earthly treatment. I really enjoyed the dark energy. And the formatting- very effective. Great write. H🌷
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Re: Re. Infinitely Irate
26th Apr 2024 6:04am
Thanks, H. Yeah, me too. It's funny that the poem came to me when I was in a mellow mood.
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26th Apr 2024 11:56am
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28th Apr 2024 4:03am
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28th Apr 2024 4:06am
I think about the best practical thing I can do is plant a tree. And stop using single use plastic water bottles. And maybe stop being so neurotic because in the end it doesn't matter.
Thanks for reading.
Thanks for reading.
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4th May 2024 4:09pm
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Re. Infinitely Irate
5th May 2024 4:22am
I love it! It's kick ass!
Clever too, of course. But the frustration is so thick that it permeates our screens!
If you kick some ass, wear boots. Just helping ya out! Lol
Clever too, of course. But the frustration is so thick that it permeates our screens!
If you kick some ass, wear boots. Just helping ya out! Lol
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13th May 2024 3:08am
Hi S, thanks for the read, comments, and advice. I'm not wild about boots. They make me claustrophobic, But I can wear mental ones. Now I need to write a poem titled Mental Boots.