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Why
I asked her why.
Why do you make me cry?
Why do you make me smile?
Every time you speak to me.
Why don't you leave me be?
To whither away in my misery.
Why don't you set me free?
Why haven't you given up on me?
What have I done to you?
To make you fall in love with me.
What do you see in me?
A hollow shell in an endless sea.
How can I make you see?
That you've got the wrong tree.
And she answered back....
Because you are my life,
through turmoil and strife.
Because I want to hold your hand
even when it is slipping like sand.
Because there is no doubt,
you're the one I can't live without.
Because you are my friend,
to be with you until the end.
Because I love you and always will,
you have my heart till it is still.
Because you are my lover
and I will make you suffer…
if you don’t snap out of this
my face will be the last thing you'll ever see.
And that is WHY….. I love her ... wouldn't you?!?!
Why do you make me cry?
Why do you make me smile?
Every time you speak to me.
Why don't you leave me be?
To whither away in my misery.
Why don't you set me free?
Why haven't you given up on me?
What have I done to you?
To make you fall in love with me.
What do you see in me?
A hollow shell in an endless sea.
How can I make you see?
That you've got the wrong tree.
And she answered back....
Because you are my life,
through turmoil and strife.
Because I want to hold your hand
even when it is slipping like sand.
Because there is no doubt,
you're the one I can't live without.
Because you are my friend,
to be with you until the end.
Because I love you and always will,
you have my heart till it is still.
Because you are my lover
and I will make you suffer…
if you don’t snap out of this
my face will be the last thing you'll ever see.
And that is WHY….. I love her ... wouldn't you?!?!
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25th Apr 2024 2:20pm
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25th Apr 2024 2:35pm
God i love this, It had to go straight into my RL, the call and answer style really suits your penning I have to say. Just wonderful. :)
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25th Apr 2024 2:58pm
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This is a streaming flood of sincere confessions and a thoughtful decisions when the heart turns blind. Some Loves are quite a useless suicide..
I love your grammar and diction, nice one.
Stay safe my friend
I love your grammar and diction, nice one.
Stay safe my friend
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25th Apr 2024 5:00pm
What can I say.. I’m useless when it comes to love.. thank you for your nice comment my friend
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25th Apr 2024 5:09pm
good morning dearest Sam that is the nature of unconditional love I am determined my kindness save even one from their mind that is wrongly bent on destruction... because I see a growth in being who's first and most powerful motivator was his hatred of women... women let me down early on in life but my Father did not... he is the one and only one who can reach me and he is also the one who through the pain has me see growth and I know I want to see all of you again in the immortal realm and not chained to the demons you created out of pain, hurt or guilt...
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25th Apr 2024 5:23pm
no love is unconditional ...thats bullshit... its the nature of love... there is always a condition... when you love you expect to be loved back... so here is the first condition right from the start.. nothing in this world is unconditional... we are all conditional creatures... in everything we do we want something in return... selfish.. yes... so please be selfish Crimson .. go and find conditional love ... and make sure you get something for your efforts...
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25th Apr 2024 5:29pm
humans expect to be loved back by other humans...my Father has taught me I am made very different I expect humans to stab me in the back and single me out for cruelty taking my kindness for weakness and my honesty for stupidity... still I am kind with open eyes and face no matter how shattered my mind is my Father protects me except with I take up the metaphorical hatchet to get even then I am stepping on his toes and he'll let me fail...Vengeance is his and he will give you a dose of his wrath just to wake you up.
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25th Apr 2024 8:18pm
Ok I’ll come.. only if your handy man is not home… that would be awkward and a little messy with all those strawberries