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black and blue
like the conductor of
a train moving backwards
the unsure movement
of words in your mouth
the blind eye of a needle
the moon hanging from
the noose of the night
sky
the eloquence of a cat
napping on a winters
day
the gift of not sharing
with others what is
rightfully yours
the knowledge that the
war to end all wars was
only the prelude to a
greater war
walking sullenly through
pasture trying not to
step in cow shit
ignoring the sun
and banguishing
love to a medieval
dungeon
beware
the days are
perilous
Published 25th Apr 2024
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29th Apr 2024 00:48am
Honest critique costs big money. You get this... lol.
And well now, this write is better than you probably think. The thought processes to come up with the descriptors were on point. It reads large, yet fits in the palm of the readers hand. Like a conch shell, relaying the sound of the ocean. This is a huge write, for what it says.
Very, very good lines building a well said poem. awesome.
And well now, this write is better than you probably think. The thought processes to come up with the descriptors were on point. It reads large, yet fits in the palm of the readers hand. Like a conch shell, relaying the sound of the ocean. This is a huge write, for what it says.
Very, very good lines building a well said poem. awesome.
29th Apr 2024 2:56am
12th Jul 2024 11:08pm
I like how you spill wisdom without giving too much away, as if to make us more aware of things lurking.
Great write,
Great write,
13th Jul 2024 3:37am
