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Goodbye Isn't Final
No goodbye
Is truly final
For destiny
Hands out favors
Unlike a
Cop who
Passes out
His menacing
tickets
Is truly final
For destiny
Hands out favors
Unlike a
Cop who
Passes out
His menacing
tickets
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Re. Goodbye Isn't Final
24th Apr 2024 10:14am
Dear F,
You are on a poetic roll! I love the analogy between love and a ticket. Fabulous! H🌷
You are on a poetic roll! I love the analogy between love and a ticket. Fabulous! H🌷
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24th Apr 2024 10:15am
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24th Apr 2024 10:48am
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24th Apr 2024 12:13pm
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Re. Goodbye Isn't Final
24th Apr 2024 2:58pm
You and I and goodbye … will never happen. You lift me up even after that cop gives me that ticket
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24th Apr 2024 3:10pm
Re. Goodbye Isn't Final
24th Apr 2024 3:12pm
I feel sorry for you guys needing to rat pack someone who is broken already to get your kicks...he isn't innocent but my mind still find's love for him... I guess it's okay with you if he cheats on you here there everywhen bless your heart Faith.
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24th Apr 2024 3:19pm
Dear Crimson,
You've got me so confused! I don't understand what you mean. I'm a free spirit but I do have morals. Perhaps, you are referring to my fictional novella.that I just posted. I'm really trying to understand you.
Faith
You've got me so confused! I don't understand what you mean. I'm a free spirit but I do have morals. Perhaps, you are referring to my fictional novella.that I just posted. I'm really trying to understand you.
Faith
Re: Re. Goodbye Isn't Final
24th Apr 2024 3:48pm
no you think this guy loves you Faith and you've jumped on his bandwagon like the world always does.
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24th Apr 2024 4:08pm
Re. Goodbye Isn't Final
24th Apr 2024 3:55pm
True indeed, goodbye is not forever. We will meet around the corner of life again:) God read Faith..
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Re. Goodbye Isn't Final
24th Apr 2024 5:13pm
hello Lu what are you doing here in California again in this little town... I though you needed to be free of me...I'm not a little girl anymore... you know Daddy was always with us even in the dark times He says don't let guilt and fear of you are stop you... be yourself and be free in all dominions Daddy has set aside his overbearing jealousy of you and us aside he love the men and women and realizes all beings have honor and yes Lu he created them all thank you Lu for taking me on an astral trip of forever our journey is only over if you want it you don't owe me anything my love is free.
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