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I Lost You
I think I lost you
Somewhere in the words
We laughed and joked
And said things that were upsurd
I wondered if we were friends
Someone who could
Understand
What I tried to convey
With a pen in my hand
Yes I lost you
And I am ok
The sun still rose
And the rain washed allot away
One day we'll might
Run into each other again
Do not worry
I am still your friend.
Somewhere in the words
We laughed and joked
And said things that were upsurd
I wondered if we were friends
Someone who could
Understand
What I tried to convey
With a pen in my hand
Yes I lost you
And I am ok
The sun still rose
And the rain washed allot away
One day we'll might
Run into each other again
Do not worry
I am still your friend.
Published 23rd Apr 2024
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23rd Apr 2024 3:41pm
What an amazing poem this is.
Do not worry
I am still your friend. > these words are truly heartwarming.
If only everyone was such a good friend 💕
Do not worry
I am still your friend. > these words are truly heartwarming.
If only everyone was such a good friend 💕
23rd Apr 2024 3:59pm
23rd Apr 2024 5:03pm
No my dear … you don’t loose anyone.. especially you.. those you do were not your friends in the first place
23rd Apr 2024 5:07pm
23rd Apr 2024 5:11pm
This write shows that you have a very kind soul. Be careful and guard yourself. Unfortunately people like you (us) make easy marks in this world
23rd Apr 2024 5:13pm
23rd Apr 2024 7:57pm
It shows real maturity to remain friends with someone even after you’ve parted ways.
23rd Apr 2024 8:00pm
23rd Apr 2024 11:55pm
Something to build on, possibly. I enjoyed the hope in your write for sure. 😊
24th Apr 2024 00:53am
24th Apr 2024 3:46am
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