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My Secret
Shh
Come with me
I have a secret to tell
There once was a man
I fell under his spell
There was things that he wanted
Things I could do
Should I do it
Will this stay between
Me and you
First there was some
Sucking, deep
And to the back
Then there was
Fucking, deep
And to the back
There was some
Running, down
A trembling thigh
A whole lot of
Cuming, him
And I.
At the end
Was a deep kiss
Shhh
It’s our secret
You will keep this?
Come with me
I have a secret to tell
There once was a man
I fell under his spell
There was things that he wanted
Things I could do
Should I do it
Will this stay between
Me and you
First there was some
Sucking, deep
And to the back
Then there was
Fucking, deep
And to the back
There was some
Running, down
A trembling thigh
A whole lot of
Cuming, him
And I.
At the end
Was a deep kiss
Shhh
It’s our secret
You will keep this?
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Re. My Secret
22nd Apr 2024 2:18am
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22nd Apr 2024 2:34am
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22nd Apr 2024 3:10am
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22nd Apr 2024 3:13am
sorry... I'm terrible at keeping secrets... I Have to tell everyone about this amazing poem... You shouldn't have told me about that
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22nd Apr 2024 3:15am
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Anonymous
22nd Apr 2024 4:08am
I promise I won't tell, I'll just fantasize about it. Promise you won't tell anyone that? :)
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22nd Apr 2024 4:10am
Re. My Secret
These lines could also speak for many a woman's first time when it was with someone she is no longer involved with
I fell under his spell [I was in love with him]
There was things that he wanted [sex]
Things I could do [let him have it]
Should I do it [say yes or no?]
Will this stay between
Me and you? ['famous last words' on his part, if he goes to boast about his 'score']
To answer that question - Won't tell it if was a real life encounter
I fell under his spell [I was in love with him]
There was things that he wanted [sex]
Things I could do [let him have it]
Should I do it [say yes or no?]
Will this stay between
Me and you? ['famous last words' on his part, if he goes to boast about his 'score']
To answer that question - Won't tell it if was a real life encounter
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22nd Apr 2024 11:08am
Re. My Secret
25th Apr 2024 8:27pm
Brilliant 👏 ink spill 👏 queen 👸 sounds like 👍 an excellent illicit secret 😉 worth keeping!!
Please 🙏 keep on writing ✍ ok 👌 peace and blessings always
Please 🙏 keep on writing ✍ ok 👌 peace and blessings always
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25th Apr 2024 8:32pm