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One Night
yes.. member how
I took your name
gave you flooding
memories instead
nocturnal passion
burned you
my whispers
burying you
ttheres only flasbacks
of my tongue
deep in your mouth
and Netherlands
how you were
owned that night
still haunts you
as a secret sin
I took your name
gave you flooding
memories instead
nocturnal passion
burned you
my whispers
burying you
ttheres only flasbacks
of my tongue
deep in your mouth
and Netherlands
how you were
owned that night
still haunts you
as a secret sin
Published 19th Apr 2024
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Favourite verse
theres only flasbacks
of my tongue
deep in your mouth
and Netherlands [new euphemism for me]
The first verse with the phrase "'member how I took your name" suggests poem is a memory of a naughty night booked in the hotel posing as a married couple under the surname of one of the partners. (The proverbial "Mr & Mrs Smiths" .)
theres only flasbacks
of my tongue
deep in your mouth
and Netherlands [new euphemism for me]
The first verse with the phrase "'member how I took your name" suggests poem is a memory of a naughty night booked in the hotel posing as a married couple under the surname of one of the partners. (The proverbial "Mr & Mrs Smiths" .)
