deepundergroundpoetry.com
Riddle
You moody little thing.
You're never out when
I want you to.
whether alone or with
your friends;
whether captured or
set free.
(written for the Endless Riddle thread.)
You're never out when
I want you to.
whether alone or with
your friends;
whether captured or
set free.
(written for the Endless Riddle thread.)
Published 5th May 2012
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 6
reading list entries 1
comments 8
reads 903
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
6th May 2012 12:40pm
Hi Rafaela.
Soo nice and sweet
I am longing for more verses of yours.
(like everybody else in DUP, I suppose)
Lucaxxx
Soo nice and sweet
I am longing for more verses of yours.
(like everybody else in DUP, I suppose)
Lucaxxx
6th May 2012 8:31pm
6th May 2012 3:30pm
Happy that you published this one.
It has a great fluidity to it and like you saw can have many different meanings to different readers.
I thought "You moody thing" was a great first liner and the rest fell into place with ease.
pristine!
It has a great fluidity to it and like you saw can have many different meanings to different readers.
I thought "You moody thing" was a great first liner and the rest fell into place with ease.
pristine!
6th May 2012 8:33pm
i wouldn't have submitted it if you hadn't told me to actually.
I really appreciate your kind words :)
I really appreciate your kind words :)
6th May 2012 4:26pm
I'm not sure if the answer was revealed or not, and I won't search or guess.
Nice little verse that reads very smoothly and provokes a few thoughts.
Nice little verse that reads very smoothly and provokes a few thoughts.
6th May 2012 8:34pm
that's a bonus :)
thanks a lot! Yes the answer was found by Eamonn. Clever guy!
It was flowers.
thanks a lot! Yes the answer was found by Eamonn. Clever guy!
It was flowers.
7th May 2012 11:18am
And your short little pieces fascinates me like a masala bollywood film with a national award!!!
7th May 2012 11:58am
