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I Am Redemption

You've hit rock bottom
You need to be saved
Seven deadly sins have devoured your soul
You still fell further
Mother nature warned you
You still haven't listened
I can deliver you from your sins
I can give you salvation  
Atonement  
But do not take me lightly
Do not test my patience
I am your second chance
A chance to change the course of your life
Your journey
Do not lie to me
Or yourself
I can see your true intentions
I am redemption
You must earn my respect
You must believe in me  
And have faith in yourself
Most importantly you must change
Lying to me will bring eternal damnation
Look in the mirror  
At your true reflection
Become the best version of yourself
True change starts from within
I am redemption
An opportunity for forgiveness  
Absolution
I am redemption
Written by Mstrmnd1923
Published | Edited 5th Nov 2024
Author's Note
Part 8/10 of the "I Am" series
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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