How To Disappear Completely

This is a powerful poem. Nicely said and well executed

Thank you Vision.

Abuse diminishes self.
Your poem depicts the process perfectly. Holding you in thought, my friend.

Exactly. Thank you for the feedback.

stay strong

Thank you wolf.

Very dark, hypnotic, and evocative feel to this, for me.  The different ways you worked with the metaphors (especially in the first two stanzas) shows that you know what you're doing.  Great transitions of imagery and emotion really capture the feel of this quite well.  It's nice and clean and tidy, succinct, but packs a punch.  Just some parameters of observation, in how I see it.  The actual story and theme are progressive and gradual and builds up to a very haunting disposition to be considered.  If one is to be vicarious with this, they can feel death closing in, heh.  Anyway, overall, good job.  Thanks for sharing!

Thank you so much for the in depth review, it is appreciated.

The details in this really paint a great pic of disappearing.

I dilute my presence

Really vivid write!

Thank you kindly Adelphina.