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Outcast
ominous brass
a prologue to cloister dread.
ascension of paranoia
haply inducing doubt
love ones turns assumed foe
the mind wanders it's tortured cell
solitude turns exilement
stranded incognito
looking glass with dead eyes
reflection is deemed vile
sinister string
a prelude to raging wrath.
ascension of indignition
comes overwhelming hate
once a nymph, turns grim
wrongful form of intent
indignition turns resentment
the fallen
looking glass with departed eyes
reflection of despair
a prologue to cloister dread.
ascension of paranoia
haply inducing doubt
love ones turns assumed foe
the mind wanders it's tortured cell
solitude turns exilement
stranded incognito
looking glass with dead eyes
reflection is deemed vile
sinister string
a prelude to raging wrath.
ascension of indignition
comes overwhelming hate
once a nymph, turns grim
wrongful form of intent
indignition turns resentment
the fallen
looking glass with departed eyes
reflection of despair
Published 5th May 2012
| Edited 14th Aug 2012
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12th Jun 2012 2:03pm
[faceless man]
"it kinda compliant to your piece but lacking the luster."
I disagree, I find your use of diction creates a much better appreciation of the point/emotions your trying to get across.
This is an astounding poem.
"it kinda compliant to your piece but lacking the luster."
I disagree, I find your use of diction creates a much better appreciation of the point/emotions your trying to get across.
This is an astounding poem.
12th Jun 2012 2:35pm
Its too raw leaving no room for imagination, lacking the beauty your piece has but nonetheless I'm overjoyed to have you think highly of this because this piece kinda marked my baby step towards poetry.
Thanks!
Thanks!
