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Naked Pink
Within a single day's blink.
Fuschia buds blossom
an exquisitely pale pink.
Impatient branches wear
their now exotic veil.
The leaves felt erotic
throbbing in the gale.
Wind ruffled petals,
Glisten with dew.
The stagnant empty winter
is now a voluptuous floral view.
The naked pink will call to you.
Fuschia buds blossom
an exquisitely pale pink.
Impatient branches wear
their now exotic veil.
The leaves felt erotic
throbbing in the gale.
Wind ruffled petals,
Glisten with dew.
The stagnant empty winter
is now a voluptuous floral view.
The naked pink will call to you.
Author's Note
Picture is a close up of my tree
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Re. Naked Pink
16th Apr 2024 11:56pm
Perfect picture and poem pairing... (Sorry for the alliteration)... nicely done db...
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Thank you, I just wrote what I saw
I have a fascination with the camera zoom, lol
I have a fascination with the camera zoom, lol
Re. Naked Pink
17th Apr 2024 00:03am
What a beautiful poem & tree. Weather was gorgeous the last two days!
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17th Apr 2024 00:28am
Re. Naked Pink
17th Apr 2024 00:25am
Vivid and colorful expression. Characteristics and traits of both the natural view and the human spirit entwine throughout. Exquisite and exceptional vocabulary, reads nice, transitions of emotion are present, etc. All of the makings of a nice little poem. Thanks for sharing, and take care!
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17th Apr 2024 00:30am
Why thank you very much. Loved your comments
I'm glad to hear it reads nice.
Have a great night!
I'm glad to hear it reads nice.
Have a great night!
Re. Naked Pink
17th Apr 2024 00:32am
It’s amazing how nature can produce all those amazing colors we see around us… it’s almost erotic in nature
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17th Apr 2024 00:40am
Hi. It was meant to be erotic as well, lol
Thank you, it's cool you picked that up
Thank you, it's cool you picked that up
Re. Naked Pink
17th Apr 2024 00:58am
Eloquent, beyond beautiful and perfectly penned. You knocked it out of the park!
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17th Apr 2024 9:18am
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17th Apr 2024 2:18pm
Re. Naked Pink
17th Apr 2024 3:40pm
This is such a delight to read, the metaphor is perfect. Exotic and erotic, brilliant!
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17th Apr 2024 5:49pm
Re. Naked Pink
18th Apr 2024 1:55am
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18th Apr 2024 10:09am
Thank you very much for checking out & commenting.
The tree is so beautiful when it blooms
Have a great day!
The tree is so beautiful when it blooms
Have a great day!
Re. Naked Pink
19th Apr 2024 7:49am
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21st Apr 2024 10:03pm
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Re: Re. Naked Pink
21st Apr 2024 10:06pm
Hi. Thank you very much. Yes you definitely get what I was going for.
I appreciate the nice comments!
Have a good night, find some magic
I appreciate the nice comments!
Have a good night, find some magic