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Invoked
Puffs of white cotton drifting
on an unquenchable blue.
Gentle wind swirling
tickling the edges of my gown
making a heedless thing of my hair.
Deeply breathing the cool air.
Holding it in.
Lungs hugging like a bear,
before allowing it to escape within.
Wishing my thoughts were mine.
Whispering on a slack wet paper.
Words running with blue wine,
unblotched despite my touch.
Thoughts swirling like the wind,
scorching against my face.
Demanding its own way,
caring little of what I say.
on an unquenchable blue.
Gentle wind swirling
tickling the edges of my gown
making a heedless thing of my hair.
Deeply breathing the cool air.
Holding it in.
Lungs hugging like a bear,
before allowing it to escape within.
Wishing my thoughts were mine.
Whispering on a slack wet paper.
Words running with blue wine,
unblotched despite my touch.
Thoughts swirling like the wind,
scorching against my face.
Demanding its own way,
caring little of what I say.
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16th Apr 2024 7:07pm
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Anonymous
16th Apr 2024 9:56pm
I like the similarities of wind (nature) and thoughts in this. Sometimes thoughts can float by like a cloud and other times we can't stop them, like an incoming storm.
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17th Apr 2024 00:26am
Thank you for floating with me Dragon. You don’t mind if I call you by your first name Dragon?!
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Anonymous
17th Apr 2024 2:42am
Not at all. :)
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18th Apr 2024 2:59am
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18th Apr 2024 3:16am
Actually I’ve written this with another … she was invoked … I was invoked with her invocation so we left the title as it is
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18th Apr 2024 3:25am
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Re. Invoked
19th Apr 2024 3:30pm
Beautifully written Sam. This piece truly provokes and invokes quite a vision.
Nicely done ☺️
Jackie xo
Nicely done ☺️
Jackie xo
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Re: Re. Invoked
19th Apr 2024 4:13pm
Thank you Jackie... I will always do my best best to invoke and provoke you...ops.. did that come out right?
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20th Apr 2024 1:15am
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19th Apr 2024 7:49pm
Too much heaven in this inspired muse.
The cool wind in my hair and the breeze touches my poetic flair, why not then
get a flowing pen with nice poem.....?
Very Good nature poem.happiness to you.Sam Nash
The cool wind in my hair and the breeze touches my poetic flair, why not then
get a flowing pen with nice poem.....?
Very Good nature poem.happiness to you.Sam Nash
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19th Apr 2024 7:54pm
thank you for reading again... if you keep this up you will be nominated to be my muse very soon.
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I am a simple writer, i say it on the fly, so you may always
find my mistakes, either spelling or even grammar as i care less about my Muse,
And i think, when we write from the heart, and from a real sincere inspiration, we give right and wrong at the same time, and we must keep authenticity in our feelings, with their bad and good vibes..
Nice words from you my friend, we just interact, no man is an island
find my mistakes, either spelling or even grammar as i care less about my Muse,
And i think, when we write from the heart, and from a real sincere inspiration, we give right and wrong at the same time, and we must keep authenticity in our feelings, with their bad and good vibes..
Nice words from you my friend, we just interact, no man is an island
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20th Apr 2024 1:49am