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Sparks
I begin with her ear,
And if she’s like me,
Just a tug on her lobe
Fills her with electricity,
I want to map her out,
My lips have this urge,
To find every little spot
That makes her body surge,
I whisper my intent,
And how she blushes red,
She says my little venture
Must be taken to the bed,
Her bashful voice
Feels like a dream,
‘I hope that you won’t stop
Until you make me scream’
And if she’s like me,
Just a tug on her lobe
Fills her with electricity,
I want to map her out,
My lips have this urge,
To find every little spot
That makes her body surge,
I whisper my intent,
And how she blushes red,
She says my little venture
Must be taken to the bed,
Her bashful voice
Feels like a dream,
‘I hope that you won’t stop
Until you make me scream’
Published 16th Apr 2024
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Short rhymes, writers block lately.
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16th Apr 2024 1:09pm
16th Apr 2024 5:45pm
Hungry desire, illustrated in favourite lines:
My lips have this urge,
To find every little spot
That makes her body surge,
My lips have this urge,
To find every little spot
That makes her body surge,
23rd Apr 2024 1:58am
When you begin with my ear... oh God! the tingles just overtake every cell, straight down the spine and too... well you get the point. lol
"I want to map her out", I love that... When you find every little spot the rewards are beyond comprehension.
And the intent... the intent to make her scream... Now what could possibly be more rewarding than accomplishing that...
And knowing that she will do so much more back to you in return...
I must admit I find myself here because your name references one of the greatest love songs of all time in my opinion. :) But I am really glad I found myself to read this. :)
"I want to map her out", I love that... When you find every little spot the rewards are beyond comprehension.
And the intent... the intent to make her scream... Now what could possibly be more rewarding than accomplishing that...
And knowing that she will do so much more back to you in return...
I must admit I find myself here because your name references one of the greatest love songs of all time in my opinion. :) But I am really glad I found myself to read this. :)
23rd Apr 2024 3:03am
Very gracious Kristina, thank you very much for reading and sharing. I always appreciate any comments, even when I don’t think to respond to them. Cheers!
(Curious what love song you’re referring to, if you happen to see this)
(Curious what love song you’re referring to, if you happen to see this)
23rd Apr 2024 3:12am
23rd Apr 2024 5:10am
