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The Day We Met

The deafening tears in the hallway  
As whispers echo in the distance  
Screams approaching the doorway  
I'm fading out of existence  
I hear the sound of a screeching door  
As the nurse let my family in  
The shuffling of shoes on the floor  
As drool runs slowly down my chin  
I feel the moisture from his tears  
From a face I can't remember  
I love you dad is all I hear  
Sounds of his voice so familiar  
Can't place where I know him from  
My eyes still unable to open  
But my heart is soothed with comfort  
Memories coming back soon I'm hoping  
Dark and gray consume my vision  
As I try to form some words to say  
Approaching me now my wife's mission  
Nothing could ever stand in her way  
I can hear her whisper in my ear  
As she places her hand on my chest  
Don't leave me now I love you dear  
As I force out words with my final breath  
I love you too sweetie  
You've always been my angel  
Please move forward without me  
I know this must be painful  
All the things I wish I could say  
As my body this darkness now consumes  
And at that moment I floated away  
And from above I saw the whole room  
All this love I felt that filled my life  
My body laying on my deathbed  
My son standing next to my kneeling wife  
As beautiful and precious as the day we met
Written by Mstrmnd1923
Published | Edited 28th Jan 2025
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