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The Tongue Tip

When you told me
that you'd been feeling low
 
I took it upon myself,
one article at a time
 
to place my mouth upon
what you didn't like about yourself
 
and that mood certainly shifted
 
dragging it out
nice and slow
 
and so quickly
you forgot.
Written by DetectiveOGasm
Published | Edited 15th Apr 2024
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