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Glacier Blue
The water was a blue universe where the soul is fluid.
Lifetime far away from the closest human grid.
Aquamarine dream, shines a glacial sheen
of a mountainside secluded lake.
Engulfed in triangular summits with their bleached
termination dust flakes.
The peace was so still and so primitively profound.
There existed no need to make a single sound.
My every hurt was soothed with liquid blue bliss.
Morning would bring a hypnotic mist.
Moistening blades of grass that are April sun kissed.
Grateful to be alive to witness such a sight.
My soul floats the motionless blue with
sweet trembling tranquil delight.
Lifetime far away from the closest human grid.
Aquamarine dream, shines a glacial sheen
of a mountainside secluded lake.
Engulfed in triangular summits with their bleached
termination dust flakes.
The peace was so still and so primitively profound.
There existed no need to make a single sound.
My every hurt was soothed with liquid blue bliss.
Morning would bring a hypnotic mist.
Moistening blades of grass that are April sun kissed.
Grateful to be alive to witness such a sight.
My soul floats the motionless blue with
sweet trembling tranquil delight.
Author's Note
Remembering my visits to Lake Eklutna, Alaska
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Re. Glacier Blue
7th Apr 2024 10:49am
Hello deliabear, how are you... Wanted to let you know that since likes are kept anonymous, that I liked this write, very well done... dig it: deadwolf
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7th Apr 2024 10:52am
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7th Apr 2024 11:04am
Aww. Thank you. It's my fav spot my sister takes me to.when
I visit her in Alaska.
I visit her in Alaska.
Re. Glacier Blue
7th Apr 2024 11:04am
Like Her, I truly felt I was really there! It sounds like such wonderful place to be. Stellar poem, Debbie! It's so beautiful l!
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7th Apr 2024 11:23am
Thank you so very much. I'm going bye memory, but the first time I saw that secret
blue lake, I thought I died and was in heaven.
To me Alaska is the most beautiful place on earth.
My sister & my nieces and nephew have lived there 18 years.
blue lake, I thought I died and was in heaven.
To me Alaska is the most beautiful place on earth.
My sister & my nieces and nephew have lived there 18 years.
Re. Glacier Blue
7th Apr 2024 11:41am
Tranquil, beautiful, serene and relaxing. Your poems capture those feelings often. Your image is great as well. Nice work.
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7th Apr 2024 11:57am
The image is the real lake I wrote about.
That's what nature is to me, tranquil, soothing, grand.
I like to share that with people
Thx for stopping bye and nice comments! 🤗
That's what nature is to me, tranquil, soothing, grand.
I like to share that with people
Thx for stopping bye and nice comments! 🤗
Re. Glacier Blue
7th Apr 2024 2:32pm
Nature can really touch us in the most special way, thank you for taking us there, it looks beautiful.
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8th Apr 2024 4:43am
Nice description and depiction. The way you articulated the scenery almost gives an aesthetic of being there. Your deep appreciation of color and detail are mesmerizing in creating visual depth. You have quite a vivid and lucid vocabulary. Anyway, great write as always. Thanks for sharing - take care!
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8th Apr 2024 8:13am
Thank you for all the feedback. I try to describe the scenery so vividly
that you can picture being there. I'll never forget actually being there,
but to have a picture to remind me, makes description come very easy for me.
My goal is to transport the reader. Your comments make me feel very happy
that I could share what I see.
that you can picture being there. I'll never forget actually being there,
but to have a picture to remind me, makes description come very easy for me.
My goal is to transport the reader. Your comments make me feel very happy
that I could share what I see.
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Anonymous
9th Apr 2024 1:17am
Primitively profound...that's about as perfect as it gets!
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9th Apr 2024 1:39am
Hi, glad you liked that. That word primitive just came to me.
Thx for checking out and such a nice comment!
Thx for checking out and such a nice comment!
Re. Glacier Blue
12th Apr 2024 9:50pm
your mesmerizing and evocative poem that beautifully captures the serenity and awe-inspiring beauty of a secluded mountain lake. it's a captivating and immersive piece that transports the reader to the majestic world of the glacier blue.
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13th Apr 2024 8:33am
I'm glad you were transported, that's my hope with the description
Again such nice comments, thank you!
Again such nice comments, thank you!
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22nd Apr 2024 12:56pm
Hello Delia\Debbie
Through this poem you have graced the ice glaciers and spirit of ice. I always love that crusted hill sight as we have this here until at least May. I find there is a comfort in gazing into these half frozen horizons. There is something quite unshaped and magical about it. Thank you for sharing this poem! I much enjoyed the read.
blessings
Rianne
Through this poem you have graced the ice glaciers and spirit of ice. I always love that crusted hill sight as we have this here until at least May. I find there is a comfort in gazing into these half frozen horizons. There is something quite unshaped and magical about it. Thank you for sharing this poem! I much enjoyed the read.
blessings
Rianne
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22nd Apr 2024 5:20pm
Hello! This glacier lake my sister takes me to in Alaska is magical. Sounds like you
live in a beautiful place too. I'm glad you enjoyed. Hope it brings the peace that it
gave me to write it.
Thanks for nice comments!
live in a beautiful place too. I'm glad you enjoyed. Hope it brings the peace that it
gave me to write it.
Thanks for nice comments!