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AND STILL I WAIT
WHERE
are the words you
promised me; the
words you teased
me with. Yes, they
were promised.
You've always kept
your promises, maybe
late sometimes but always
kept. I need you and
depend on you.
PLEASE
my Muse, PLEASE give
me a fresh word, a sentence
or rhyme that'll be uplifting
to me and others.
YES
I'll wait at the Kissing
Place for you to share
the ways you have in the past.
OKAY?
are the words you
promised me; the
words you teased
me with. Yes, they
were promised.
You've always kept
your promises, maybe
late sometimes but always
kept. I need you and
depend on you.
PLEASE
my Muse, PLEASE give
me a fresh word, a sentence
or rhyme that'll be uplifting
to me and others.
YES
I'll wait at the Kissing
Place for you to share
the ways you have in the past.
OKAY?
Published 6th Apr 2024
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6th Apr 2024 2:06am
6th Apr 2024 2:07am
6th Apr 2024 2:20am
Who ever this lucky lady is, had such a beautiful and great admirer in you.
6th Apr 2024 4:59am
6th Apr 2024 9:48am
Dear TO,
Alas, the muse. I appreciated the idea she’s constant, busy and late in arriving sometimes but when she does get there it’s worth the wait. I’m sure the lure of the kissing tree helps! 😉
Lovely piece. H🌷
Alas, the muse. I appreciated the idea she’s constant, busy and late in arriving sometimes but when she does get there it’s worth the wait. I’m sure the lure of the kissing tree helps! 😉
Lovely piece. H🌷
6th Apr 2024 12:54pm
Thank you for your gracious comment. Have a great write day. Hugs and love, Oral
6th Apr 2024 11:37am
6th Apr 2024 12:56pm
6th Apr 2024 2:43pm
Life holds many surprises. Maybe one day she will surprise you and just show up there.
Fantastic poem.
Fantastic poem.
6th Apr 2024 3:06pm
